Often, they describe Bella as being both curious and a bit intimidated. She's intrigued by Edward's otherworldly beauty but also a bit scared. Edward, on the other hand, is usually filled with a sense of excitement and a strong pull towards Bella. His emotions are a mix of wonder and a kind of possessiveness that he doesn't fully understand yet.
Some authors will show Bella's emotions as a kind of nervous anticipation. She might be fidgeting a bit when she first sees Edward, not sure how to react. Edward's emotions are described as a deep longing. He's been so alone for so long, and when he sees Bella, he feels this immediate connection that makes him want to protect her and get to know her better. His eyes might be described as full of a new - found light and hope.
Authors often describe a sense of shock and recognition. For example, Inuyasha might be stunned for a moment, his eyes widening as he sees Kagome. There's a pull towards her that he can't deny, and he might feel a mix of anger (from past experiences) and a strange longing. Kagome, on the other hand, might feel a sense of relief and excitement, with her heart racing.
A lot of excitement. For Bella, it's like she's entering a whole new world with Edward, and the kiss is the start of that adventure. And for Edward, it's a moment of surrender. He's been holding back his vampire instincts, and in that kiss, he's letting some of that guard down, so there's also a bit of vulnerability in the mix.
It's hard to single out just a few, but there are some up - and - coming authors as well. One such author is 'StarlightStoryteller'. Their fanfictions about Edward and Bella meeting online are really engaging. They focus a lot on the characters' emotions during their online interactions. They describe how Edward's reserved nature and Bella's curious nature play out in the digital space, which is really fascinating to read.
Sometimes in fanfiction, Bella might be more assertive when they meet. Instead of being the shy girl, she could be the one to initiate the conversation. This change in her personality can lead to a different dynamic in their relationship from the start.
They often use words like 'electric', 'fiery', or 'intense'. The emotions are described as overwhelming, like a tidal wave crashing over both of them.
In fanfiction, the emotions during their first kiss are multi - layered. Bella is experiencing a new level of closeness to Edward. She feels a sense of belonging that she's never had before. There's also a bit of fear, because she knows Edward is different. Edward's emotions are just as complex. He's both exhilarated by the connection with Bella and also worried about what this means for her. The kiss is a moment where all these emotions collide, and writers often use vivid language to bring this to life. For example, they might write about how Bella's hands tremble slightly as she reaches up to touch Edward's face during the kiss, and how Edward's eyes close in a moment of pure bliss and worry all at once.
A possible emo fanfiction could focus on Edward's fear of losing Bella in a more extreme way. Maybe he has premonitions of her death that are clouded by his emo - like pessimism. So he becomes overly protective, almost to the point of smothering Bella, which then causes tension in their relationship.
For Edward, there's likely a mix of relief and fear. Relief because he's finally expressing his deep love for Bella, but fear because he's exposing his true feelings and also worried about how this will change things. For Bella, she's probably mostly filled with excitement and a bit of shock. The excitement of this new level of intimacy with Edward, and the shock that this moment she might have dreamed of is actually happening.
It really depends on the writer's intention. Sometimes Bella wins if the story is about her growth and empowerment. For instance, if the fight is about her independence, she might stand her ground and make Edward see her point of view.
One possible plot could be that they form a very different kind of relationship compared to the original story. Maybe in 1918, they are both involved in some historical events that shape their bond. For example, they could be helping victims during a war or epidemic, which brings them closer together in a more heroic and selfless way.