A great plot twist could be that Merlin's two masters are both being manipulated by a common enemy. They think they are working towards different goals but in reality, they are pawns in a bigger scheme. Merlin realizes this and has to figure out how to make them work together against the real threat. Also, what if one of Merlin's masters turns out to be a shape - shifter? Merlin has been serving this person thinking they are one thing but they are actually something else entirely, and this revelation throws his loyalty and his role as a servant into chaos.
One interesting plot twist could be that Merlin's two masters end up being related without knowing it. For example, one master could be a long - lost heir to a throne and the other could be an advisor to the current, false king. Merlin has to balance his loyalty to both while keeping this secret. Another twist might be that Merlin discovers a magical bond between his two masters that was created by an ancient spell. This bond starts to influence their actions and Merlin has to find a way to break it without harming either of them.
One key plot twist could be the servant having to choose between the two masters in a life - or - death situation. Maybe one master is revealed to be an enemy in disguise, forcing the servant to reevaluate loyalties.
One idea could be to explore Merlin's internal struggle in more depth. He has to balance the needs and wants of two very different masters, which can be extremely challenging. For example, what if the two masters have conflicting goals regarding the safety of the kingdom? Merlin would have to use his magic and wits to keep both happy while also ensuring the greater good. Another idea could be to introduce a new character who discovers Merlin's double - serving situation and tries to use it to their advantage, creating a whole new set of problems for Merlin to solve.
First, understand the characters well. Know Merlin's personality, his strengths like his magic and his loyalty, and his weaknesses. For the two masters, figure out what makes them different and what they expect from Merlin. Then, create a strong plot. It could be about Merlin facing a difficult decision between the two masters that has high stakes. Also, use vivid descriptions. Describe the settings where Merlin serves the masters, whether it's a grand castle or a hidden magical place. This will make the story more immersive.
Well, for character development, use dialogue effectively. Let the characters' conversations reveal their true natures. If Merlin is serving a noble master and a commoner master, have them debate about class differences through their dialogue. Also, give each character unique quirks. One master could have a habit of pacing when thinking, while the other always fiddles with a small object. For Merlin, show his internal struggle. He might have a strong moral code but serving two masters sometimes forces him to make difficult choices that test his values.
The concept adds depth because it shows the different power dynamics at play. Each master may have their own goals and motives, and the servant has to figure out how to align or not align with them. For instance, one master could be a noble with good intentions but limited power, while the other could be a powerful sorcerer with more self - serving goals. The servant's actions in response to these two very different types of masters can really explore themes like loyalty, morality, and the cost of power in Merlin fanfiction.
A plot twist might be that the baby has some sort of prophetic power even before it's born. This power could show visions to Morgana or Merlin about the future of Camelot. It could also be that the pregnancy is part of a grander magical plan set in motion centuries ago by an ancient sorcerer, and Merlin and Morgana are just pawns in this plan, not realizing the true significance of the pregnancy until later events unfold.
One interesting plot twist could be that Arthur actually kidnaps Merlin to protect him from a greater danger that Merlin is unaware of. Maybe there's a powerful sorcerer after Merlin, and Arthur believes the only way to keep him safe is to take him away secretly.
One interesting plot twist could be that when Merlin and Morgana time travel, they end up swapping their magical abilities. So Merlin has Morgana's dark magic skills and vice versa. This creates a whole new dynamic as they struggle to adapt to these new powers in a different time period.
A really interesting plot twist could be that Merlin's stabbing is a pre - ordained event. It was foreseen by some ancient prophecy. But instead of it being his end, it is the trigger for a new and powerful form of magic to awaken within him. This new magic could be the key to saving Camelot from an even greater threat that was approaching unnoticed.
One interesting aspect could be the unique character interpretations. In many Merlin fanfictions, the characters are often explored beyond what we see in the show. Maybe in 'not just a servant', Merlin's role is redefined in a way that shows his true potential and power, not just being limited to the servant facade. It might also explore his relationships in a new light, perhaps his friendship with Arthur is deepened or changed in a creative way.