Another scary story could be about a ghostly figure in an old attic. 'I see a white thing in attic. It float. I don't know what is it. I don't want go there no more.' The simplicity of the language gives a sense of a childlike fear, which can be very effective in a scary story.
There's a story of a cursed forest. In this 'bad English' version, it might go like 'In the forest, there is a bad thing. It follow me. I run, but it always there. I feel cold and afraid.' The lack of perfect grammar adds to the eerie feeling. The forest seems more menacing with these simple, somewhat broken sentences.
Sure. One 'bad English' scary story could be about a haunted house where a girl hears strange noises at night. 'I go to the old house. It make creaky sound. I very scared.' Simple words but still spooky.
A man bought an old antique mirror. At first, he thought it was a great find. But soon, when he looked into it, he saw a face that wasn't his own. The face in the mirror started to change, becoming more and more distorted and menacing. Every time he passed by the mirror, the face seemed to be closer to getting out of the mirror world into his own.
Once upon a time, there was a sign that said 'No enter'. A man ignored it and entered. Strange things started to happen. The room seemed to shift and voices whispered with wrong grammar like 'You no should be here'. He soon realized that the bad grammar was part of the curse in this place.
There was a dark forest known for its bad reputation. A hiker got lost in it at night. He heard growls all around him. Suddenly, a pair of glowing eyes emerged from the bushes. It was a large, menacing creature. He ran, but the creature chased him. The trees seemed to come alive, their branches reaching out like arms to grab him. He tripped over a root and when he looked up, the creature was right above him, ready to pounce.
Here is one. In a small village, there was a haunted well. People said that at midnight, a pale hand would reach out from the well. A curious boy, Tom, decided to go there at midnight. As he got closer to the well, he heard a low moaning sound. Suddenly, a cold hand grabbed his ankle. He struggled and managed to break free and ran all the way home, never to go near the well again.
There was a girl who loved to write poems in English. However, her English was not good. She entered a poetry competition. When the results came out, she found out that her bad English made her poem look like a mess. People laughed at her instead of appreciating her feelings. She was heartbroken. It shows how bad English can lead to sad consequences in creative pursuits.
The simplicity. 'Bad English' often uses basic words and simple structures. It makes the stories seem more primitive and closer to our basic fears. For example, 'There is a monster. It big and ugly. I scared.' It's direct and hits the fear center quickly.
A scary story goes like this. There was a hotel room that was said to be cursed. Every guest who stayed in that room reported seeing a shadowy figure by the window at midnight. One guest even said that the figure tried to touch him. Since then, the hotel has a hard time getting people to stay in that room.
Sure. One of the scary stories could be about a haunted house. People who enter it start to hear strange noises and see shadowy figures. It gives a feeling of being constantly watched.
Sure. One bad teacher story I know is about a teacher who always yelled at students for no good reason. If a student made a small mistake like forgetting a book, the teacher would shout at them in front of the whole class, making the student feel very embarrassed and humiliated.
Sure. One of my bad friend stories is about a so - called friend who borrowed a lot of money from me and then just disappeared. I tried to contact him but he changed his number and moved without telling me. It was really a betrayal.