One way could be to change the situation to a consensual medical sedation for a valid medical reason. For example, if the girl is injured and needs medical treatment, and she consents to being sedated in a proper medical setting.
Rather than forcefully sedating the girl, the plot could focus on building a trusting relationship. For instance, if there is a mystery or danger, the characters work together to protect the girl and she willingly takes a sedative as part of a plan to stay safe when they have to hide or escape, with her full understanding and consent.
You can add a lot of mystery. For example, the captors could be wearing masks and not revealing their identities or motives at first. This will keep the readers guessing and make them more interested.
If we want to change the plot to a more positive one, we could focus on them developing a strong platonic friendship. They could support each other through family issues, like helping each other deal with difficult step - parents or adjusting to a new family situation.
The relationship could be re - framed as an equal one. Remove the elements of slavery and power imbalance from the sexual context. Make it about mutual respect and shared interests. For instance, the characters could be partners in an adventure or a quest, and their relationship could be based on equality and consent.
One possible plot development could be that the girl manages to break free from the captors and then sets out to expose their wrongdoings. Maybe she has some hidden strength or knowledge that helps her in this escape.
First, come up with an interesting monster girl concept. Decide what kind of monster she is, like a mermaid - like monster girl or a werewolf - type. Then, think about the 'changed' aspect. Is it a change in her appearance, personality, or her situation? For example, she could have been a shy monster girl but something made her become bold. After that, create a setting, whether it's a fantasy world or a modern - day city. Start writing the introduction, introducing your monster girl and the initial situation.
Instead of focusing on the act of punching, the story could focus on resolving conflicts through communication. For example, if there was a situation where a character was about to punch a girl in the boob in the original story, it could be changed to the character stopping themselves and having a heart - to - heart conversation.
One way is to focus on the boy's self - discovery and acceptance of different aspects of femininity in a consensual and positive way. For example, a story could be about a boy who is curious about girls' experiences and through positive interactions and learning, he incorporates some of those elements into his own identity in a healthy way.
First, simply remove the offensive term'slut'. Then, the story could focus on a confident and free - spirited fem Harry. For example, she could be portrayed as someone who is unafraid to break the traditional rules of the wizarding world in a positive way, like advocating for new forms of magic or more inclusive policies in Hogwarts.
She can be shown as a great protector. For instance, when a natural disaster strikes, Power Girl is the first one there, using her strength to save lives and her flight ability to reach people in hard - to - reach places. This would emphasize her selfless nature.
We could rewrite it as 'Girl's journey of self - discovery and growth'. This focuses on the positive aspects of a girl's development without any negative or judgmental connotations.