The bag man lurked in the alley. His empty sack awaited a victim.
The bag man was always there, lurking in the shadows. One night, I saw his bag move on its own. Scary.
The bag man lurked in the alley. His bag twitched. Then, the bag unzipped itself and out came a thousand eyes staring at me. And that was just the beginning.
The bag man walked slowly. Each step closer was a step towards doom.
The bag man lurked in the alley. I heard his raspy breath, then he opened his bag and darkness swallowed me.
The bag man's silhouette emerged. I blinked, and my soul was no more. You see, his presence alone was a harbinger of doom. He didn't need to make a sound or a move. Just his shadowy form was enough to send shivers down my spine. When I blinked, it was as if he had the power to steal my very essence, leaving me as an empty shell in that moment.
It depends on the person. For those who are easily spooked by the unknown and sudden scares, 'Bag Man' can be really terrifying. The two - sentence structure is designed to shock, and it does a good job of that. However, some people who are more desensitized to horror might not find it as scary, but it still has an eerie quality.
One: The last man on Earth sat alone in a room. There was a knock on the door. Two: I woke up to find 'You are next' written on my mirror. I live alone.
Here's another. 'The old house was empty. I walked in, the floorboards creaking. A photo on the wall showed a face that looked like mine. The lights flickered. When I looked back at the photo, the face was gone.'
The old house stood alone. Creaking noises filled the night. I saw a shadowy figure. It vanished when I blinked.
She heard a knock on the door. No one was there when she opened it. But there were wet footprints leading inside.