For a preachy ending in an LGBT story, you might consider having a group discussion among the characters where they come to some profound realizations and conclusions about the challenges and joys of the LGBT community, and then share those thoughts with the readers/viewers in a somewhat didactic manner.
Keep it real and focus on the characters' emotions and experiences rather than moralizing. Let the story unfold naturally without forcing a message.
One issue could be that it feels forced. It might seem like the author is trying too hard to push a certain message, rather than letting the story unfold naturally. For example, if it suddenly turns into a lecture about acceptance at the very end, it can break the flow of the narrative.
It can lessen the impact. A good LGBT story should draw the audience in and make them feel something. A preachy ending can make the story feel more like a sermon than a piece of art, causing the audience to disconnect.
Keep it relatable. Use real-life examples and show different perspectives to avoid coming across as preaching.
You need to build relatable and complex characters. Focus on their emotions, challenges, and growth. Also, explore themes that are relevant and meaningful to the LGBT community without stereotyping.
Here are a few novels with good endings: 1. "Guide to the Genius Adonis"(also known as "Counting the Ages"): This is a love story that goes from school to marriage. The story in the middle is a little brutal, but the ending is good. 2. "My Wife Is Spoiled to Heaven": This novel is very heart-wrenching, but the ending is good. 3. "Love at First Sight, Love at Goodbye": This was a modern romance novel about love and marriage. It was about the love story between a surgeon and a master's student. The ending was also good. I hope these recommendations will meet your needs.
You need to tie up loose ends and give the readers a sense of closure. Make it satisfying and in line with the story's themes.
The ending should feel natural and not forced. It could be a happy ending, a bittersweet one, or even a tragic one, as long as it fits the story's logic and has an emotional impact. Sometimes, leaving a lingering thought or a lesson for the reader can make the ending more memorable.
You can start by thinking about what message or feeling you want to leave the reader with. Maybe it's a sense of hope, mystery, or closure. Then, build the ending around that.
The key is to keep creating new plot twists and conflicts. You need to have a wide imagination and not limit yourself to conventional storylines.