Well, usually a novel has too much going on when there's a lack of a central theme or main plotline that everything else ties into. It can also be when there are too many genres or themes mashed together without a smooth integration.
It happens when there are so many plotlines and subplots that it becomes confusing for the readers to follow.
It can happen when there are too many subplots and characters that make the story confusing.
Well, it often happens when there's no clear focus or when you try to incorporate every idea that comes to mind. This can lead to a jumbled narrative and confuse the readers.
Definitely. If a novel has too much going on, it can make the plot convoluted and the characters' development suffer. A good novel should have a clear main thread with supporting elements that enhance rather than clutter the narrative.
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Yes, in my opinion, Monster Hunter World does have too much story. It sometimes feels like the story bits interrupt the main gameplay of hunting monsters, which is what most players are there for.
I'm not a novel author, so I don't know the specific progress of writing the novel. If you can provide me with more information about the novel, I will try my best to answer your questions.
Novels might explain too much when the explanations are repetitive or don't add anything new to the story. It can make the reading feel sluggish and lose the reader's interest.
It could mean that the regression analysis or concept is overly new or novel in a way that might be difficult to handle or understand. Maybe it has so many new elements that it's hard to fit into the existing framework.
You can avoid too much exposition by starting in the middle of the action and filling in the necessary background gradually. And make sure your descriptions and explanations enhance the story rather than slow it down.