I wrote a novel about League of Legends

Dear big shots, readers, and followers, it has been seven or eight years since I started writing online novels in junior high school. In fact, I've been dreaming of writing an online novel for seven or eight years, but I never had the chance. Some time ago, I watched Uncle Luan's League of Legends: Who Can Fight? I really felt my blood boil. A feeling that I haven't felt in a long time swept through my body bit by bit. A few days ago, I quit my job. I want to really fight for my dream once." Because I also like League of Legends, I also opened a book at Qidian for the first time," Yui Dream of League of Legends." Since this is also my first time writing a book, I'm sure there will be many shortcomings. Therefore, I hope that all my readers and bar friends can help me take a look and point out my shortcomings to spur me. I don't need monthly votes or recommendations. I just need you to point out my shortcomings. I will definitely write it step by step, regardless of whether this book will become popular or not. I only hope that I can stick to my dream once. Thank you, everyone.

Answer 1

The following suggestions could be used for League of Legends novels:
1. Description of the character's background and personality to allow the reader to better understand the character and follow the story.
Set the time and place of the story and describe the surrounding environment, terrain, and enemies.
3. Description of the interactions between the characters, including their combat skills, strategies, and teamwork.
4. Create emotional relationships between the characters such as friendship, love, kinship, etc. so that readers can better understand the characters and feel the atmosphere of the story.
5. Use vivid language and humorous elements to increase the reading and interest of the novel.
Pay attention to the cohesiveness and logic of the story so that the reader can better understand the plot and development of the story.