Among the following sentences, the one that was not worded wrongly was: 1 " Based on your knowledge of web literature " was changed to " Based on your experience of learning web literature ". 2 " According to the knowledge you have learned about online literature " was changed to " According to the knowledge you have learned about online literature ". 3 " Based on the knowledge you have learned about online literature " was changed to " Based on the knowledge you have learned about online literature ". [4]" According to the knowledge you have learned about web novels " was changed to " According to the knowledge you have learned about web novels ". 5." According to the knowledge you have learned about online literature " was changed to " According to the knowledge you have learned about online literature ". 6 " Based on the knowledge you have learned about online literature " was changed to " Based on the experience you have learned about online literature ". 7 " Based on the knowledge you have learned about online literature " was changed to " Based on the experience you have learned about online literature ". 8 " Based on the knowledge you have learned about online literature " was repeatedly changed to " Based on the experience you have learned about online literature ".
You did not provide a sentence to modify. Please provide the sentences that need to be modified and I will try my best to help you modify them.
The sentence A was a mixture of " the creation of the characters in this novel " and " the author did not delve into life well ". It could be changed to " the author did not delve into life well and did not reflect the creation of the characters in this novel well ". Therefore, he chose:A.
The sentence "modern calligraphy art pursues visual, artistic and cultural qualities" should be deleted from the sentence "pursuit" or "cultural" should be changed to "artistic".
Why did he fall in love with her? Why did he fall in love with her? Reason: The word "le" in the original sentence indicates the completion of the action while the word "why" indicates a question, so different grammar is used. The revised sentences were more concise and concise, and the grammar was more accurate.
The first sentence was correct. Children's stories are very realistic because children's cognition and values are often affected by reality. Therefore, children's stories need to reflect real life and educate children with correct values and behaviors. Therefore, the theme and plot of the works usually revolved around real-life social issues such as education, family, friendship, love, etc. 2. The value of a work of art depends on the audience's acceptance. The audience's evaluation of the work is also subjective. Therefore, works of art had no absolute value. This sentence was wrong. The value of a work of art was objective. The creation and spread of a work of art had social significance and value. The audience's evaluation of the work was also subjective because the audience's understanding and feelings of the work varied from person to person. To evaluate the value of a work, many factors needed to be considered, such as artistic skills, theme, depth of thought, cultural value, etc. Therefore, works of art did not have absolute value, but their value and influence could not be ignored.
A. The improper combination of "the origin and nature of Kunqu" and "originally did not belong" Change "originally did not belong" to "does not belong". Answer A
Reason for error: Comma was used instead of a full stop. Correct Sentences: The following sentences that have been written incorrectly indicate the reason for the error. Wrong: The sentence "state the reason for the error" uses a commas instead of a full stop. Correct Sentences: The following sentences that have been written incorrectly indicate the reason for the error. Explanation: In Chinese, a full stop is usually used to separate the end of a paragraph while a commas is usually used to separate the beginning and middle of a paragraph. Therefore, the sentence " state the reason for the error " should be followed by a commas instead of a commas before the full stop.
The content and sentences of this book were very rich.
A. The network was operating freely and open, allowing the network to access information without restrictions. This sentence was not wrong, but it could be modified to make it more fluent. It could be changed to: " The freedom and open operation of the network allows the network to access information without restrictions."
The full moon rose at night, and the land was silent as the silver moonlight sprinkled on the ground. The sky was dark blue, as if it was a picture drawn by colorful clouds. The forest path was illuminated by the moonlight, and the trees along the road swayed gently in the breeze. The mountains in the distance gradually blurred in the night, as if they were covered by a thin veil. The rapid flow of the stream made a pleasant sound as if it was telling a touching story. The leaves rustled gently in the breeze as if they were playing a gorgeous piece of music for this silent night. Night fell, and the distant village was illuminated by the moonlight like a silver world. The air in the dense forest was filled with a fresh and refreshing smell. The lake was unusually quiet at night, reflecting the starry sky like a dreamy painting. The sky and the sea merged into one, and the stars and the moon shone between them as if it was a mysterious world.