I'm writing a martial arts novel with more than 1,000 words at the beginning. Please give me some suggestions. I want to improve!

2024-09-25 14:35

I want to comment on the character's plot, language, writing, rhythm, setting, whether it's attractive, where it needs to be improved, and so on ~ Please exchange! Please help each other! ow "It's actually you, Shi Hua…" Looking at the pale-faced woman in front of him, looking at the blood dripping from her right hand that was holding the sword, Bai Mo could no longer maintain his usual composure. He was stunned for a moment before he suddenly understood. He shook his head in disbelief and asked,"Have you not let go of your hatred? How many people yearn for a stable and leisurely life? Since you have it, don't be obsessed with the past! Go back and live well! Don't fight with Imperial Preceptor Lan Yue! You will die, do you know…" "Living is just living an ignoble life! Other people don't understand, but Big Brother, don't you understand?" He pointed the sword in one direction, and a purple mist rose from the sword. Long Shihua looked straight at Bai Mo and said,"Big brother, it's over there! The person who exterminated my Dragon Clan is over there! Lan Yue owes my Long Family hundreds of lives! Is it possible for me to go back? Big brother, have you forgotten who destroyed your country of Zhao? Kill your father and brother! Lan Yue was right in front! Don't you want to kill your enemy?" How could he not want to! How could Bo Mo not want to kill Lan Yue immediately? Nine years ago, Lan Yue, the Nation Master of the Nation of Xi, led his army south and destroyed the nation of Zhao, which was in the southeast of the Nation of Xi, with a groundless crime. Countless citizens of the country of Zhao became refugees and slaves overnight. Bo Mo was the descendant of the Great General of the State of Zhao. When he was 10 years old, he saw his father and brother die on the battlefield one by one. He saw his mother commit suicide in despair! How can we forget the hatred of our country and our family? However, Lan Yue's spells were powerful, and Bai Mo knew very well that killing Lan Yue with his own strength was like throwing an egg at a rock. Moreover, Long Shihua was so agitated, so he needed to maintain his calm. "Shi Hua, don't be like this! We're different…I'm just living a life of exile! Slaughter, death, I've seen too many of them over the years! If I kill Lan Yue, at most I will lose a cheap life, but it is a kind of relief! But you have a stable life! You can let go of your hatred! Do you know that after learning about your background and seeing you live so leisurely and happily in the Heaven Riding Sect, I really feel that I have seen some kind of hope! This world isn't just about hatred. Killing and war aren't unsurpassable. I never thought that you would not be freed…" "Free? How can I be free! "You can't even do it yourself, so why should I…" Raising her head slightly, two streams of tears rolled down Long Shihua's face. She looked up and saw a full moon slowly rising."I will never forget that when I was five years old, it was also a full moon night like this! However, that night was even deeper, and there was fire everywhere! Corpses were everywhere, and there was blood! I can't find my mother! I can't find it! I can't find anyone! There were only earth-shattering cries! I can only see black figures, distorted, all distorted!" "No!" Long Shihua shook his head, as if he did not want to think about it anymore. Tears streamed down his face."Our Dragon Clan's Hundred Generation Sword Sect, in one night, in one night…" "Miss Long, I don't want to play hide-and-seek with you. If you want to kill me, come out quickly." Lan Yue's voice slowly pressed down from afar, so steady, so cold…The tone of the voice remained condensed wherever it passed. Although it was far away, the surrounding vegetation swayed. Long Shihua was about to burst into tears when Bo Mo stopped her."Don't be rash!" Tears rolled down his face. Going over would only be suicide! Which parent in the world didn't want their children to live a carefree life! Why don't you understand? Go back to the Heaven Riding Sect! Your family in heaven definitely wouldn't want to see you like this!" "I'm not impulsive! I didn't expect you to be such a cowardly person! I, Long Shihua, have misjudged you, my adopted brother! You can choose not to avenge your country and family, but I will definitely end the hatred of exterminating your family!" Long Shihua's tone was firm. It turned out that his adopted sister had such a resolute side. Bo Mo knew that it was difficult to persuade her, but he had to! Ten years ago, he had watched his family die one by one, and ten years later, he could no longer watch his adopted sister die! "If you really want to take revenge, you should go back to the Heaven Domination Sect and find your master first! Don't mess around like this!" Long Shihua suddenly held his sword horizontally in front of him, his eyes sweeping across the sword from left to right."Master told me that as long as I can master Ice Crack, I can kill Lan Yue!" Now that I've finally mastered it, I'll definitely be able to avenge the Dragon Clan! Master never lies to me!" "No! I don't care what your master says, you're not allowed to go now! The Heaven Rider Sect's treasure, the Heaven Rider Divine Sword, is in Lan Yue's hands. Your master won't ignore it! If you want to kill Lan Yue, you have to kill your master! Before he makes a move, you must not act rashly!" "I can't wait for him! If Master really wanted to kill Lan Yue, he would have done it long ago! Today, Lan Yue and I will either die or die!" "In that case, Big Brother can only use force today!" After saying that, Bo Mo pulled out his sword. "Then don't blame your sister for being impolite!" Long Shihua's sword was filled with killing intent. Before the two of them could even react, Bo Mo's eyes suddenly widened. His face was filled with pain as he fell heavily to the ground. "What's wrong with you? Big brother!" Looking at this sudden situation, how could Long Shihua abandon Bai Mo? Who was this person? What kind of strange martial arts did he use? Why would Bo Mo fall down for no reason? "He was hit by my Soul Absorption." A voice came from behind him. It was calm and cold, but it was a girl's voice. It was so familiar. Long Shihua was startled, and turned around abruptly. In the darkness, a girl in a night outfit walked over with her head lowered. The moonlight outlined her silhouette, and she looked no more than fifteen years old. She kept her head down, her hair falling over her shoulders, covering her eyes. "Junior Sister…Ru Mo…Why are you here?" Long Shihua murmured in surprise, as if he was in a dream. "Do you want me to help you kill him?" Ru Mo raised her hand and pointed at Bo Mo. Her head was still lowered and her eyes could not be seen."It's as easy as flipping my hand now." "I didn't want to kill him." Long Shihua explained. "Oh, that's a pity." Ru Mo spat out. Long Shihua felt a chill down her spine. She couldn't figure out what this Junior Sister was trying to do. Seven days ago, Ru Mo ran out of the Heaven Taming Sect, causing her master, who had always been aloof, to fly into a rage for three days and three nights. Even so, her master did not send anyone to look for her, nor did he inquire about her news. It was as if he wanted her to die on her own.

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2024-09-25 16:36

It was already very well written! In the beginning, he described the emergence of a sect and the unique skills of its leader to pique the readers 'interest. At the same time, it also showed his strength and background by describing the disputes between the sect leader and others. However, in wuxia novels, the sect and the background of the martial world were very important. I suggest that you continue to describe the background of this sect and Jianghu in subsequent articles so that readers can better understand this world. In addition, when describing the unique skill of the leader, it could describe its power and characteristics in more detail so that readers could better understand the power of this skill. In addition, when describing the dispute between the leader and the others, it can be more in-depth to explore the causes and consequences of this dispute so that readers can better understand the importance of this plot. I hope these suggestions will be helpful. I wish you greater progress in your writing!

I want to write a web novel, please give me some suggestions.

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2024-07-16 17:57

The following suggestions could be used to write web novels: 1. Decide on the theme and plot of the story: Before you start writing, you need to determine the theme and plot of the story. This will help maintain direction and cohesion throughout the writing process. 2. Create attractive characters: characters are one of the most important elements in a novel. You need to create attractive characters that will resonate and connect emotionally with the reader. Consider the character's background, personality, motives, and goals to ensure that the character has depth and complexity. Pay attention to language and style: The language and style of the novel should match the theme and plot of the story to ensure that the language is smooth, concise and clear, and in line with the overall style of the novel. Try to use vivid metaphor and metaphor to increase the appeal and interest of the story. 4. Keep the plot coherent and logical: The plot needs to be coherent and logical to avoid conflicting or illogical situations. Techniques such as time jumps, recollections, or flashbacks can be used to enhance the logic and cohesiveness of the plot. Maintain the rhythm of the story: The story needs to have a rhythm that makes the reader feel nervous and excited as the plot advances. You can enhance the rhythm of the story by setting up suspense, adding twists and conflicts, and so on. 6. Pay attention to revision and editing: After writing a novel, you need to revise and edit it to ensure that the story is clear, the language is smooth, the characters are vivid, and it conforms to the overall style and theme of the novel. You can ask friends or family to help review and give feedback to your work to continuously improve your writing level.

I want to write a short story, please give me some suggestions ~~!

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2024-09-12 18:19

There were a few points to note when writing a short story: 1 Choose a compelling storyline. The story could be a sudden event or a long-term experience, but the key was to keep the reader interested. Catch the characters in the story. Every character had their own personality and experiences, which would affect the development of the story. He wanted the readers to truly understand these characters and resonate with their actions and decisions. 3. Use appropriate narrative techniques. This included descriptions, metaphor, and symbolism, all of which could make the story more vivid and interesting. 4. Keep the story coherent and complete. Don't let the plot break or the character's actions and decisions be too contradictory, which will affect the cohesiveness and integrity of the story. 5. Use appropriate rhythm and emotional changes. The rhythm and emotional changes of the story were very important. Different plots and character settings could create different environments. I hope these suggestions can help you write an excellent short story!

I'm writing a novel and I want to find some more domineering martial arts and fighting techniques. Any recommendations?

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2024-09-25 09:42

I recommend the following two novels to you: 1. The "Dragon Capturing Hand" martial technique in Path of Heavenly Officials used the arm as the dragon's body and the palm as the dragon claw. It could capture the enemy and perfectly control the battle. 2. The "Time Freeze" fighting technique in War Emperor could freeze the surrounding time, allowing the enemy to be easily defeated in a state where they could not move. I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~😗

When writing a novel, I'm stuck. I hope you can give me some suggestions.

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2024-09-05 08:37

I hope you can give me some advice when writing a novel. A knot usually refers to a logical loophole or a situation where the plot development stagnates in the writing process, making it impossible for one to continue. This kind of situation is very troublesome for writers because it will reduce the reader's reading experience and make them feel depressed and unconfident. Here are some suggestions that might be useful: 1. Practice writing. Writing required constant practice. Only through practice could one improve their skills. Write more, read more, think more, and constantly improve your work. 2. Study the storyline and character development. Understanding the basic elements of the story and the rules of character development can help you better organize the plot and avoid getting stuck. 3. Revise the article. Don't be discouraged if you find your essay stuck. You can revise the article repeatedly to check the logic and plot to make the article flow more smoothly. 4. Ask for help. If you find that you can't overcome the knot problem, you can seek help from others. You can consult experienced writers or share your experiences and suggestions with other writers. 5. Relax. Writing is a process that requires patience and perseverance. Don't pursue speed or results too much. Relax and maintain a positive attitude. Believe that you will be able to write excellent works in the end.

I want to write an underworld novel with my friend. Please give me some suggestions. How many words?

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2024-09-19 20:44

Writing a novel was a very personal matter. Everyone's writing style and preferences were different. However, if you want to write an underworld novel, you can refer to the following suggestions: 1. Setting up the story: Underworld novels usually have their own unique background and setting, such as social background, character relationships, organizational system, etc. After confirming these settings, he could start to conceive the storyline. 2. Confirm the relationship and personality of the characters: The relationship and personality of the characters in the novel are very important to determine the direction and atmosphere of the story. For example, it could make the protagonist have complicated relationships and personalities to make the readers more involved in the story. 3. Setting up conflict and climax: conflict and climax are important elements in underworld novels, which can make readers more easily attracted and involved in the story. For example, the protagonist could encounter some challenges and difficulties and reach a climax in these challenges and difficulties. 4. Maintain the cohesiveness of the story: Underworld novels usually have complicated character relationships and plots. It is very important to maintain the cohesiveness of the story.

Please advise me, I want to write a martial arts novel

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2024-09-22 19:28

Writing martial arts novels required mastering some basic skills and knowledge, such as: 1. Understand the historical background and character relationships: Wuxia novels usually involve the historical background of ancient China, so you need to understand relevant historical events and character relationships such as ancient political systems, culture, religion, martial arts, etc. 2. Master martial arts knowledge: Wuxia novels usually involve various martial arts schools and skills, so you need to master some basic martial arts knowledge such as different boxing, sword, knife, and so on. 3. Familiar with all kinds of weapons and equipment: Wuxia novels usually involve all kinds of weapons and equipment such as long swords, short knives, long spears, short bows, daggers, etc. Therefore, he needed to familiarize himself with the characteristics and usage of these weapons and equipment. Understanding emotions and human nature: Wuxia novels usually involve emotions and human nature, so it is necessary to understand the weaknesses and characteristics of human nature, as well as the changes and expressions of emotions. 5. Mastering narrative skills and language style: Wuxia novels usually require powerful narrative skills and unique language styles, such as describing the psychology and emotions of the characters, using a large number of metaphor and symbols, and so on. Writing martial arts novels requires constant practice and exploration. I hope you can persist in writing and create outstanding works.

I want to write a novella, a detective series, please give me some suggestions.

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2024-09-09 16:13

Detective mystery series are a popular genre that attracts readers with fascinating plots, tense suspense, and smart detective characters. Here are some suggestions that might be useful: 1. Decide on the theme and background of the story: Before you start writing, you need to know the theme and background of the story. This will help to create an overall atmosphere for the story and ensure that the storyline matches the theme. Create a fascinating storyline: The storyline is crucial in the detective series. You need to create a tense plot that keeps the reader wondering what will happen next. At the same time, you need to ensure that the story is logical and coherent. 3. Create a smart detective character: Detective characters are an important part of the story. You need to create a clever detective character so that the reader can solve the mystery through his thoughts and reasoning. At the same time, you also need to ensure that the actions and decisions of the detective character are reasonable. 4. Create interesting characters and characters: In addition to the clever detective character, you need to create an interesting background and character for the other characters in the story. This would help enhance the appeal and legibility of the story. 5. Use appropriate narrative techniques: appropriate narrative techniques are also very important in detective series. For example, you can enhance the tension of the story by describing the detective's thought process, observation, and reasoning. Maintain the continuity of the story: It is also very important to maintain the continuity of the story in the detective series. You need to ensure that the story is logical and coherent to ensure that the reader can smoothly understand the development of the story. I hope these suggestions will help you create a successful detective and mystery series.

I want to write a martial arts novel and give me a nice name

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2024-09-10 17:31

The following suggestions can be used to write a name for a martial arts novel: 1 Snow Eagle (XYān), which meant 'an eagle as white and sharp as snow'. 2 Sword Soul (ZLūn): It means "the person who takes the sword as his soul". 3. Bloodblade (Hè Yè), which meant "a blade as red as blood." 4. Fāi Yān (Flying Swallow), which means 'as agile as a swallow'. 5. Traceless (Féng Yíng): It means "a mark that leaves no trace". 6. Divine Sword (Shén Jng), which meant "a sword like a god." 7 Guhong (Qü Héi): Meaning "Lonely Great Bird". 8 Moying (Moyng), which means "a shadow like a demon." 9 Sword's Courage (ZDn): It meant "a person who regards the sword as his courage." 10 Jueying (): It means 'a shadow that leaves no shadow'. I hope these names will be helpful. Of course, you can also come up with names based on your creativity and storyline.

I want a novel with more than a million words.

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2024-09-05 10:20

The following novels were all completed with more than a million words: 1. Battle Through the Heavens-Heavenly Silkworm Potato [2]" Lord Snow Eagle "-An outsider 3 " Full Time Expert "-Butterfly Blue [4][Demonic Sky]-Forgotten Words 5. Douluo Continent-Tang Family's Third Young Master 6 "Sword Comes"-Beacon Fire Playing with the Vassals Chapter 7: The Story of the Shepherd God-Forgotten Words 8 " Battle Frenzy "-Tomato 9 " Martial Refinement Peak "-Momo 10: The Legend of Mortal Cultivation-Forgotten Words These novels were quite popular, so he could choose one to read according to his preferences.

I'm writing a novel, please give me some nice names

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2024-09-10 06:33

Alright, I can give you some suggestions for the names of the novels as follows: 1 Legend at Night 2 The Devil's Kiss 3 " The Beautiful Female Empress of Time Travel " [Magic of the Other World] [Lord Snow Eagle] [Full-time Sword Immortal] Legend of Berserker 8 Dragon Realm Sword Soul Foreignland Veterinarians I hope these names will be of help to you. I wish you success in your novel creation!