Someone commented that the novel I wrote was too rushed and the strokes were too tender. I want to ask for advice and leave a message.
Writing a novel requires constant practice and improvement in order to write better works. As for the rush and tenderness of the novel, he could try to improve it in the following aspects: 1. Compacting Plot: Make the plot more compact so that the reader can quickly follow the development of the story. In the process of writing, you can skip and skip as appropriate to make the story more compact. 2. Character description: Make the characters more three-dimensional and real so that readers can better immerse themselves in the world of the characters. Through detailed descriptions, readers could better understand the character's psychology, personality, and appearance. 3. Grasp the rhythm of the novel. Let the rhythm of the story match the reader's reading rhythm. The rhythm of the novel could be grasped through appropriate rhythm changes, plot turns, dialogue descriptions, and other means. 4. Use of language: improve the ability to use language to better convey the story and the emotions of the characters. You can try to use different rhetorical devices such as metaphor, personification, and parallel to enhance the effect of language. I hope that the above suggestions will be of help in continuing to work hard to write better novels!
I wrote a novel to ask for advice.
Writing a novel was an interesting and challenging thing! Please tell me about your novel's theme, style, plot, and characters so that I can begin to design and write for you.
The ending of the novel is too rushed
The audience generally felt that the ending of the novel, Celebrating the Years, was too rushed. Fan Xian was assassinated by Yan Bingyun. This made many spectators feel confused and disappointed. However, according to the novel's original work and some audience speculations, Fan Xian's death might just be a setup. He would be resurrected in the second season. Therefore, there were different views and explanations on whether this ending was hasty. Some viewers thought that this was to leave suspense for the subsequent episodes, while others thought that such an ending did not conform to the logic of the plot development. In general, the audience had different opinions on whether the ending of " Celebrating Years " was rushed.
I want a novel too
Okay, what kind of novel would you like to read? I can recommend you some classic works or provide some keywords for you to search for novels that you are interested in.
I want a novel too
Hello, what kind of novel would you like to listen to? I can provide you with a variety of different types of novels, including fantasy, science fiction, romance, martial arts, and so on.
I want a nice, poetic, and ancient female name. It's two words, not too vulgar, and the strokes are appropriate.
Alright, here are some nice and poetic ancient female names with moderate strokes: 1 Clear Stream 2 Luo Xue 3 Purple Frost 4 Wild Goose Shadow 5 Falling Plum Rainy Dream (6) 7 The Mist 8 Sunset 9 Dawn Frost 10 Snow Lotus I hope these names can help.
I Want to Be a Hero Too Much
I want a collection of novels too?
If you want to learn more about novels, you can refer to the following collection of novels: 1. Battle Through the Heavens-Heavenly Silkworm Potato 2. Douluo Continent-Tang Family's Third Young Master 3 " Full Time Expert "-Butterfly Blue [4][Demonic Sky]-Forgotten Words Lord Snow Eagle-An Outsider 6 "Battle Frenzy"-Tomato 7. The Great Dominator-Heavenly Silkworm Potato 8 "Covering the Sky"-Chen Dong Library of Heaven's Path-Misty Rain Jiangnan 10 "Sword Comes"-Beacon Fire Playing with the Vassals These novels were all popular online literature novels, including fantasy, science fiction, fantasy, romance, and so on. He hoped that he could learn more about novels and literary styles through these collections.
I want to write a novel on the internet and ask for advice from an expert
Writing a novel requires patience and persistence. I suggest that you first formulate an outline of the novel and determine the basic elements and main plot of the story. After that, he could start writing down his own thoughts and ideas before gradually perfecting them. In the process of writing a novel, he could read more novels and draw inspiration and experience from them. At the same time, he could also seek the opinions of some like-minded friends or professional writers to continuously improve and perfect the novel. Lastly, remember to update and publish your novel regularly so that more people can see your work.
Why was the Lord of the Mysteries too rushed in the later stages?
" Lord of the Mysteries " was a popular fantasy novel written by a squid that loved to dive. It was published on Qidian Chinese website and was loved by readers. The story told a legend about The Fool. This book can be read or listened to on the Qidian Reading App. Langsheng Studio recommended the officially produced radio drama " Lord of the Mysteries." The quality is guaranteed, and there are many characters dubbing, allowing you to have an immersive experience. Now, you can even get an experience member by going to Qidian to listen to books! You can read authentic books and listen to authentic audio on the Qidian Reading App. The male lead was Klein Moretti. He was gentle, kind, cautious, and meticulous. His code name was The Fool. The female lead was Audrey Hall. She was strong, brave, kind, and upright. Her code name was Justice.
Why was the Lord of the Mysteries too rushed in the later stages?
The reason why the Lord of the Mysteries rushed the plot in the later stages was probably because the main character, Klein, was forced to level up quickly, and not because the author deliberately sped up the pace. After reaching Sequence 3, Klein faced the threat of Charles and Amon. He had no choice but to speed up his leveling up to deal with the crisis. Therefore, in the later stages of the leveling process, many things were forced to be neglected. Klein could only race against time. This wasn't because the author wanted to rush the plot, but because the protagonist was forced to level up quickly. This might have buried some hidden dangers.