Someone commented that the novel I wrote was too rushed and the strokes were too tender. I want to ask for advice and leave a message.
Writing a novel requires constant practice and improvement in order to write better works. As for the rush and tenderness of the novel, he could try to improve it in the following aspects: 1. Compacting Plot: Make the plot more compact so that the reader can quickly follow the development of the story. In the process of writing, you can skip and skip as appropriate to make the story more compact. 2. Character description: Make the characters more three-dimensional and real so that readers can better immerse themselves in the world of the characters. Through detailed descriptions, readers could better understand the character's psychology, personality, and appearance. 3. Grasp the rhythm of the novel. Let the rhythm of the story match the reader's reading rhythm. The rhythm of the novel could be grasped through appropriate rhythm changes, plot turns, dialogue descriptions, and other means. 4. Use of language: improve the ability to use language to better convey the story and the emotions of the characters. You can try to use different rhetorical devices such as metaphor, personification, and parallel to enhance the effect of language. I hope that the above suggestions will be of help in continuing to work hard to write better novels!
I wrote a novel to ask for advice.
Writing a novel was an interesting and challenging thing! Please tell me about your novel's theme, style, plot, and characters so that I can begin to design and write for you.
The ending of the novel is too rushed
The audience generally felt that the ending of the novel, Celebrating the Years, was too rushed. Fan Xian was assassinated by Yan Bingyun. This made many spectators feel confused and disappointed. However, according to the novel's original work and some audience speculations, Fan Xian's death might just be a setup. He would be resurrected in the second season. Therefore, there were different views and explanations on whether this ending was hasty. Some viewers thought that this was to leave suspense for the subsequent episodes, while others thought that such an ending did not conform to the logic of the plot development. In general, the audience had different opinions on whether the ending of " Celebrating Years " was rushed.
I want a novel too
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I want a novel too
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I want a nice, poetic, and ancient female name. It's two words, not too vulgar, and the strokes are appropriate.
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I Want to Be a Hero Too Much
There were novels similar to "I Want to Be a Hero Too Much" Book of Troubled Times, Author: Ji Cha 2:"Spiritual Realm Walker", Author: Xiao Langjun 3: The Tang's Table, Author: Jie and 2 4."King of Familiars", Author: Light Spring Flowing Sound Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation, Author: Mi Tian Building National Forensic Medicine, Author: Zhiniao Village 7:"Wait, Heroine." Author: Guan Guan Gongzi 8: Mantang Colorful, Author: Weird Cousin 9:"Hidden Dead Corner", Author: Get Lost Final Divine Duty, Author: Tuoba Goudan Beyond Time, Author: Er Gen "This Game Is Too Real." Author: Chen Xing LL Red Heart Sky Patrol, Author: What's the Matter? Ring of Destiny, Author: Squid Who Loves to Dive National Master of Ming Dynasty, Author: West Lake Encountered Rain Choose a Day to Ascend, Author: Otaku Pig 17:"Who's in Love After Rebirth?" Author: What's Wrong? Deep Sea Ember, Author: Yuantong Chapter 19: Cultivation in the Chaotic World of Demonic Martial Arts, Author: Wenplagiarism 20:"Who told him to cultivate!" Author: The Whitest Crow The following is a detailed introduction of these novels: 1."Book of Troubled Times":"Book of Troubled Times" is a fantasy novel, but it's more of a martial arts novel. The author Ji Cha's writing was as excellent as ever, giving off a feeling of elegance. Compared to the bookish style of the previous books, the protagonist was more heroic and his writing strength was better than before. The plot was compact, with many foreshadowing, and the unfolding plot was fascinating. The characters in the book were drawn in three-dimensional, without facial makeup. The lofty sentiments of all kinds of characters were vividly displayed. Overall, this book was very impressive, and the recommendation index was.🌟🌟🌟🌖Whether it was from the content of the book, or from outside the book to life, emotions, psychology, society, history, they could all be inspired. 2.<<Spirit Realm Walker>>: From ancient times to the present, it is rumored that there is a Spirit Realm in the world. Regarding the Spirit Realm, there were many different opinions among the famous people of the past dynasties. "From Qi to Tang, the mountains are desolate and the spirit realm is lonely. Few people visit." "Spirit Realm is hard to come by, but Ghost Craftsmen are hard to come by." 3."The Tang's Table": It was another day of learning, and the strange knowledge increased. Every time, the image was so strong. The painting of the golden age slowly unfolded. 4."King of Familiars": The theme of this book should belong to a relatively active genre a few years ago. It's not too old now, but the theme is indeed not new. However, the background and structure of the book were a little new. The content was not bad either. It was not the kind of face-slapping novel. 5:"Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation": Multiple Female Lead: The game settings are the same, but the game has changed a lot after transmigrating. The author said that he was a newcomer, but his writing was quite good. In addition, there are some problems with this article, but I personally think that the flaws do not obscure the merits. It is worth reading. 6."National Forensic Science": Bird and Pig's new book, the beginning of forensic science. The system can obtain various skills, such as gourmet food, trace examination, spot investigation, ranking…The author is a professional writer. He writes like what he writes. The description of daily life is very detailed, and he even occasionally popularizes some strange and cold knowledge. Every day, he would update two times, one on progress, and the other on water. It looked very comfortable and reflected the unique human touch and sense of immersion of the city. Tagged with: Criminal Investigation, Food, Daily Life, Demolition of the Second Generation, Hanging Orchid 7."Wait, Heroine":"Wait, Heroine" was a very comfortable book. The author's writing process was steady, steady, and step-by-step, making it easy and enjoyable to read. The story in the book was compact and made people immerse themselves in it. They could feel the author's foundation and knowledge. Even though there were some places that were a little over-the-top, overall, the book was worth reading. In addition, the author's writing style and character description were excellent, especially the description of the pet bird, which gave people a vivid feeling. In short, this book was a joyful novel that could make people laugh. If you like novels with multiple female protagonists, then this book is definitely not to be missed. 8:"Mantang Colorful": recommendation index: ****** Author: Weird Cousin Word Count: 240,000 [Status: Series] Tagged: Tang Dynasty, Machiavellian, Group Statues In the fifth year of Tianbao, he woke up from a dream. In front of him was a beautiful painting of the prosperous Tang Dynasty. He saw the bright light of "Tang Dynasty, Heaven and All Nations". Iron cavalry crisscrossed, and all nations came to worship. Civil and martial arts were governed, and ministers bowed. Poetry and wine were romantic, and it was a paradise on earth. Beautiful people and scholars sang and laughed. He also saw the corruption in the court, the eunuchs monopolizing power, the treacherous heroes flaunting their might, the decline of the country's power, the desolation of the people, the emergency at the border, and the rampant Hu Krupp. The golden drum of Yuyang shook the world. He vowed to make sure that the Tang Dynasty would not fall into danger. The new book by the author of "The End of Song" still started with Wang Zha. The protagonist was reborn as a servant of the Du family. At the beginning, he faced the biggest case of the Crown Prince's rebellion during the reign of Li Xuanzong. How would he survive in this struggle and face the upcoming An Lushan Rebellion? Personal evaluation of the divine herb! 9."Hidden Dead Corner": Although there was an event support factor, an initial order of 40,000 yuan was really too much. The rhythm was slow, and the protagonist could absorb different flowers to get different enhancements. The protagonist's IQ was online, but it did not drop. It's a strange style of mech writing. I think it's very good! Author: Get Lost Tagged: sci-fi futuristic world [Status: Series] [First order: 40041 (available on May 16, 2023)] Have you heard of it? If you turned on the music player in the dead of the night, put on headphones, and hid under the blanket to cover your head, listening to the single repeatedly. If you were unlucky and opened your eyes again, you would no longer be lying on your own bed, but would enter a strange space that was completely isolated from reality. That space…On the surface, it looked like the places we usually see, such as our bedroom, the living room, the underground garage, the bathroom, the basketball court, the construction site, etc. However, if you looked carefully, you would realize that it was different…Everything was different. Final Divine Duty: Get Out of the Way I heard that it's the avatar of an author who logged into the future ten thousand years ago. Gao Wu's book is pretty good and pretty cool. It's just that he pulled it after he left the planet. This one seems to be doing well at the moment, so I guess it's considered fodder. 11."Beyond Time": Heaven and Earth are the guest houses of all living beings, and time is a passer-by from ancient times to the present. The difference between life and death was like the difference between dreams and waking up. It was ever-changing and could not be questioned. Then, beyond life and death, beyond heaven and earth, beyond time, what awaits us? This was Er Gen's sixth novel, Beyond Time, after "The Rebel Immortal,""Seeking the Demon,""I Want to Seal the Heavens,""One Thought of Eternity," and "Three Inches of Humanity." 12:"This game is too real":-Full of likes! -Next time at the top [520 Likes]! "This Game Is Too Real" was a new book by the great author Chen Xing LL. Chen Xing LL had written "A Brainiac's Black Technology System" and "I Have a Suite in the Apocalypse". His style was humorous and he was good at writing works on a variety of topics. This book was a light novel, Chen Xing's new attempt, but it was written very well. The protagonist transmigrated to the wasteland world. In order to survive and improve his power, he gave VR helmets to the people on Earth and let them work for him as players. Based on the basic settings, the book combined the four elements of wasteland, gaming, farming, and group wear (although not really group wear). Moreover, the combination of these elements did not seem out of place. Instead, they complemented each other and made the novel more rich. At the same time, the novel also had many elements that readers liked to see. For example, the players in reality had Group chats. The players chatting would increase the interest of the novel and create a sense of life. For example, in the wasteland, the players could fight monsters to level up. This also gave them a feeling of nurturing. Moreover, the main character's location in the wasteland world had the feeling of a game like Fallout Shelter and Fallout 4… All in all, this was a very good novel. The characters in the novel were not rigid, and the setting of the two worlds in the novel was very interesting. The details in the novel were also handled well. I recommend it to everyone. "Red Heart Sky Patrol": In ancient times, the demon race went extinct. In the modern era, the dragon race disappeared. The era of the Great Divine Dao was already like smoke, and the era of the peak of flying swords had finally fallen… What happened in this world? Who would listen to the truth of history buried in the river of time? Thousands of miles of mountains and rivers are painted with corpses, and hundreds of years of heaven and earth are painted with hungry tigers. Heaven and earth are fair as heartless, I have a pure heart to survey the heavens! "Ring of Destiny":"Ring of Destiny" is a fascinating novel. The author has attracted the attention of many readers with exciting plots and fascinating characters. This book was currently being serialized and was very popular. It was a high-profile work on Qidian's male channel. Even though some people had mixed opinions about it, it was undeniable that it had very good results. I personally think that this book has a very high rating of 9.5. This is based on its popularity and my understanding and evaluation of it. Of course, different people might have different opinions about a book, mainly because of their different experiences and understanding. For the impatient readers who loved the Tarot Club and Klein protagonists, this book could be a torture. Especially for those who liked this kind of protagonist, they might feel that the reading experience was not smooth enough. But for those readers who liked the Lord of the Mysteries, this book was definitely worth looking forward to. Overall, Ring of Destiny was a novel with excellent writing, vivid characters, unique creativity, and rigorous logic. As the second book of the Lord of the Mysteries, it continued the essence of the previous book. It was definitely a good book worth reading. Although some readers were skeptical about the author's operations officer, time would prove everything. Overall, I think that The Ring of Destiny is an excellent novel and is worth recommending to everyone. "Great Ming State Preceptor":"Great Ming State Preceptor" is a rare historical text. The author has shown a solid foundation in writing. The story started from the protagonist's release from prison. He began by asking for death and then gave a sermon that shocked Zhu Di. It gave people a sense of absurdity, but it also made people want to continue reading. Through step-by-step reasoning and intelligent descriptions, the author made the protagonist stand out in history. The historical content of this book had already surpassed that of his father, Han Gaozu, and the author was still constantly updating it. As a historical novel, although the plot was not too complicated, the author's writing style and the shaping of the protagonist allowed the readers to immerse themselves in it and enjoy the pleasure of reading. In general,'The Great Ming State Preceptor' was a historical novel that made people's eyes light up and was worth reading. "Ascending on an Ascending Day":"Ascending on an Ascending Day" was a high-quality book that made people unable to extricate themselves from it. The main character of the story was an honest snake hunter. After he caught a demon snake, he began a magical adventure. In this chaotic world, not only did he have to face endless wild gods, but he also had to face a corrupt society. The author's writing was smooth, and the plot was exciting and fascinating. At the same time, the story also incorporated deep thoughts about society and history, making people gain a lot after reading it. Five stars recommended! 17:"Who's in Love After Rebirth?" The Reborn Jiang Qin Will Never Be a Lackey The first thing I did was tear up the love letter to the school belle in front of me I don't even love dogs Look at money, start a business to make money The more you don't think about something, the more you have something I'll never be a sea king after rebirth Showing off in front of people, it's so cool, it's worth watching On that day, the thick fog sealed everything. On that day, he became the captain of a ghost ship. On that day, he crossed the thick fog and faced a world that had been completely overturned and shattered. The order of the past was gone, and strange visions dominated the endless sea beyond civilization. The isolated island cities and the fleets that challenged the sea had become the only lights of the civilized world, while the shadows of the past were still stirring in the deep sea, waiting to continue to devour the dying world. However, for the new captain of the Lost Home, there was only one problem he had to consider first. Who knew how to sail the boat? 19."Cultivation in the Chaos of the Demonic Martial World":"Cultivation in the Chaos of the Demonic Martial World" is a novel that people look forward to. The author attracted the readers with his unique style and plot. The main story was about immortal cultivation, combining the elements of the infinite path and the cultivation of immortals. The protagonist accidentally transmigrated to the world of cultivation in the public examination hall and became a spirit farmer at the third qi layer. In this Demon Martial World, he was not weak. He had the ability to collect all kinds of resources to arm himself. At the beginning, there was a feeling of two worlds being reversed. There would definitely be other worlds in the future. The author's writing was smooth, and the plot was traditional and attractive. Overall, this was a novel that was worth reading. "Who told him to cultivate!" The atmosphere of the cultivation world has always been crooked. I didn't lead it astray. It's said that history books are written by the victors. Then why are there always people framing me after I win?" Sword Immortal Lu Yang said this to the reporters, expressing his anger. You can read these novels on Qidian Chinese Network.
I want a collection of novels too?
If you want to learn more about novels, you can refer to the following collection of novels: 1. Battle Through the Heavens-Heavenly Silkworm Potato 2. Douluo Continent-Tang Family's Third Young Master 3 " Full Time Expert "-Butterfly Blue [4][Demonic Sky]-Forgotten Words Lord Snow Eagle-An Outsider 6 "Battle Frenzy"-Tomato 7. The Great Dominator-Heavenly Silkworm Potato 8 "Covering the Sky"-Chen Dong Library of Heaven's Path-Misty Rain Jiangnan 10 "Sword Comes"-Beacon Fire Playing with the Vassals These novels were all popular online literature novels, including fantasy, science fiction, fantasy, romance, and so on. He hoped that he could learn more about novels and literary styles through these collections.
I want to write a novel on the internet and ask for advice from an expert
Writing a novel requires patience and persistence. I suggest that you first formulate an outline of the novel and determine the basic elements and main plot of the story. After that, he could start writing down his own thoughts and ideas before gradually perfecting them. In the process of writing a novel, he could read more novels and draw inspiration and experience from them. At the same time, he could also seek the opinions of some like-minded friends or professional writers to continuously improve and perfect the novel. Lastly, remember to update and publish your novel regularly so that more people can see your work.
Why was the Lord of the Mysteries too rushed in the later stages?
" Lord of the Mysteries " was a popular fantasy novel written by a squid that loved to dive. It was published on Qidian Chinese website and was loved by readers. The story told a legend about The Fool. This book can be read or listened to on the Qidian Reading App. Langsheng Studio recommended the officially produced radio drama " Lord of the Mysteries." The quality is guaranteed, and there are many characters dubbing, allowing you to have an immersive experience. Now, you can even get an experience member by going to Qidian to listen to books! You can read authentic books and listen to authentic audio on the Qidian Reading App. The male lead was Klein Moretti. He was gentle, kind, cautious, and meticulous. His code name was The Fool. The female lead was Audrey Hall. She was strong, brave, kind, and upright. Her code name was Justice.
Why was the Lord of the Mysteries too rushed in the later stages?
The reason why the Lord of the Mysteries rushed the plot in the later stages was probably because the main character, Klein, was forced to level up quickly, and not because the author deliberately sped up the pace. After reaching Sequence 3, Klein faced the threat of Charles and Amon. He had no choice but to speed up his leveling up to deal with the crisis. Therefore, in the later stages of the leveling process, many things were forced to be neglected. Klein could only race against time. This wasn't because the author wanted to rush the plot, but because the protagonist was forced to level up quickly. This might have buried some hidden dangers.