The Mountain River Order was a fantasy martial arts web novel written by Mo Bao Fei Bao. It described the grudges between the two male leads in the martial arts world. Although the novel had a certain influence in the field of revision, the ending in the later stages was difficult to appease, so it was not worthy of being the ceiling of revision. The specific reasons were as follows: 1. In the later stages of the novel, the development of the plot is out of control. The logic of the plot is chaotic. The relationship between the characters is complicated. The lack of a clear plot outline and character setting makes it difficult for the readers to follow the development of the story and understand the meaning of the ending. 2. The ending of the novel is contradictory and unreasonable. For example, the resentment between the two male leads has not been satisfactorily resolved, and some important plots and character settings have not been reasonably explained and explained. It is difficult to understand and agree with. 3. The writing style of the novel is often more subjective and emotional. In some plots and treatments, there may be over-expression and pretentious situations that affect the reader's reading experience and perception. To sum up, there were some problems with the plot, character setting, writing style, and ending of the Order of Mountains and Rivers. Therefore, it could not be evaluated and recognized as a ceiling.