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It's my first time writing a novel, help me edit it

2024-09-25 16:33
4. mural "I'll open the way!" Wu Sanhuo patted his chest and said to me in all seriousness. He muttered in his heart,"Hey, you open the way." A zombie would die without even knowing how. I might as well be the vanguard! "Huo Zi, this passage is so long. There must be a light. Look for it." I said. "Alright!" Wu Sanhuo rolled up his sleeves and started to search carefully. "Brother Zhang, over here!" I heard the sound and looked over. Wu Sanhuo had already thrown the lighter into the lamp. Whoosh! The entire passageway was lit up, and the exit could be vaguely seen. "Brother Zhang, Lets go!" Wu Sanhuo said excitedly.“OK。”I replied. Wu Sanhuo jumped down at once, and I followed closely behind. Wu Sanhuo looked ahead and said to me,"Brother Zhang, what period is this place from?" "I don't know. It should be a product of the Warring States Period." "Wow, I heard that there were many precious items during the Warring States Period! With a few Night-Luminescent Pearls, even my great-grandson won't have to worry about food and drink!" "You should also grow your ambition. Don't think about material pursuits!" I cursed. "Alright, Brother Zhang. I won't say anymore. However, how far is the treasure room from here? I can't wait!" Saliva flowed out from the corner of Wu Sanhuo's mouth. Just like that, we chatted and laughed for more than half the journey. Suddenly, Wu Sanhuo stood still, his eyes fixed on the wall. I was shocked and quickly looked at the wall. Seven murals were displayed in front of me. I quickly scanned it, but I didn't find anything wrong. "The last three, the last three." Wu Sanhuo kept mumbling. I looked carefully at the last three paintings again and immediately collapsed on the ground. My heart was so nervous that it seemed to stop and sweat flowed out. It was as if his soul had been sucked away. He was a walking corpse staring blankly at the murals on the wall. I had never been so nervous before, thinking to myself, How, how could this be? Was he still human? Three heads and six arms! Freak? Monsters? Or some extinct high-level animal? What memorial was it holding? Why am I so afraid? 5. blood wall Brother Zhang, this is..." Wu Sanhuo was dizzy and sat on the ground. I could clearly see large beads of sweat dripping from his hair. "I, I don't know either." I was so scared that I couldn't speak. "We can't stay here for long. Let's go." I felt that something was amiss, so I pulled Wu Sanhuo into the depths. He felt uneasy,[What kind of place is this?] Why was there such a strange thing? First, the stone silently sealed the entrance of the cave. Then, he discovered the Eight Trigrams Reversal Technique cast from corpses! Now, he had also discovered a mural of a three-headed and six-armed demon (demon for now). This place was too strange… I walked with a lot of questions. Unknowingly, I vaguely saw the shadow of the door. Wu Sanhuo saw it and quickly ran over. I immediately pulled him back and whispered,"Huo Zi, don't be impulsive." Be careful of traps! You accidentally triggered the mechanism. If we don't fall into the trap and die, we'll be shot into a hornet's nest! Or worse." When Wu Sanhuo heard this, he retracted his leg and said to me with a smile,"Brother Zhang, your stealing skills are high." You charge first, I'll cover the rear! There's a mechanism to remind me in time! Otherwise, we'll suffer together..." When I heard this, I shook my head and cursed in my heart,[Wu Sanhuo is really selfish. I wonder if he will use me as a human shield if I trigger the mechanism!] It was close, it was close! I saw the door! I couldn't help but run over with my wildly beating heart. When I wiped the sweat off my head and looked up, I suddenly exclaimed,"Ah! This, this…" I choked. I sat down on the ground and felt a chill from my feet to the top of my head. Sweat flowed down from my head, wetting my hair and clothes. My head was about to explode. I stared at the door like a zombie. Wu Sanhuo heard the news and rushed over. I turned my head stiffly and said to him,"Fire, fire, don't look at the door." You, you'll be scared to death!" Wu Sanhuo didn't believe it and looked at the door."Ah!!!" Wu Sanhuo screamed and fell to the ground, foaming at the mouth and fainting. I can't believe this is a wall of corpses! No matter how I rubbed my eyes, what appeared in front of me was a bloody wall of corpses. I couldn't hold on any longer and fell to the ground. He thought, How, how could this be! What kind of place was this? F * ck, I don't believe this place is so evil! I sat up and looked at the corpse wall. I pulled Huo Zi and crawled a few steps back. She was so scared that she tightened her heart,'This place is definitely not simple…' I've just started writing. It's my first time. If I don't write well, please forgive me!
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2024-09-25 17:31

Of course, I'd be happy to help you edit the novel. Before you start, you can tell me the type and theme of the story you want to write, as well as the style and characteristics you want the novel to present. This way, I can better provide you with advice and guidance.

It's my first time writing a novel, help me edit it

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2024-09-16 17:40

Of course I can help you edit your novel! However, you need to let me understand the content and style of your novel first so that I can better provide you with suggestions and suggestions for improvement. Please let me know what kind of modifications and improvements you need. Let's start together!

It's my first time writing a novel, help me!

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2024-09-03 08:44

There were a few points to note when writing a novel: 1. Decide on the theme and plot of the story and come up with the basic framework of the story. 2. Create characters so that readers can really immerse themselves in the story and resonate with the characters. 3. Use language skills to create a unique story language to make the work more appealing. Pay attention to the structure and rhythm of the novel to make the story develop naturally and smoothly and bring pleasure to the readers. 5. Read more excellent novels to absorb inspiration and experience to continuously improve your writing level. I hope these suggestions will be helpful. I wish your novel will get better and better!

Can any of you help me edit my novel?

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2024-09-01 14:45

Revising web novels required professional knowledge and experience. As a fan of web novels, I can provide some suggestions, but I can't modify it on behalf of humans. Revising a novel required a deep understanding of literature and storylines, which required a lot of reading and experience. If you need to modify your novel, it is recommended to seek the help of an experienced literary editor or professional writer. They can provide professional advice and guidance to help you modify your novel.

Is there anyone who can help me edit and publish my novel?

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2024-09-19 20:25

Revising and publishing a novel required professional editors and publishing staff. They could make all-round changes according to the plot, character setting, writing style, and other aspects of the novel to make it more in line with publishing standards and market demand. At the same time, the editors and editors also had to read and proofread the novel to ensure that there were no mistakes in grammar, spellings, and punctuations. If you already have an electronic version of the novel, you can try to contact a professional publishing house or editorial team to modify and publish the novel. You can also find like-minded writing partners or editorial teams through social media or online writing communities to work together to complete the publication of the novel.

It's my first time writing a novel, please enlighten me

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2025-03-11 02:17

Writing a novel was a skill that required constant practice and exploration. To write a good novel, one first needed a good story idea and idea. Then, he needed good writing skills, including narrative, character creation, plot arrangement, and so on. Finally, he needed a good editor and proofreader to ensure the quality of the novel. Keep your creativity and imagination in the process of writing and constantly explore new plots and characters. At the same time, they also had to pay attention to the character's personality and psychological description so that the readers could better understand the character. Pay attention to the cohesiveness and logic of the plot to avoid confusing the reader. Writing a novel required constant practice and exploration. Only by constantly trying and improving could one write a good novel.

Who can help me edit my short story?

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2024-10-03 09:38

Professional editors or writers specializing in your genre could do a great job. But they might charge a fee. You can find them on freelancing platforms or through literary agencies.

Can you help me edit the novel?

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2024-07-16 19:13

Of course. May I ask which novel needs to be edited?

This is my first time writing a book about my growth. Help me come up with a suitable title.

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2024-09-11 03:28

The titles of the novels related to growth are as follows: The Road to Growth Dreams Come True The Taste of Growth The Story of Growth My Journey of Growth: An autobiography Growth notebook My University Life: A Growth Book My Road to Work: A Growth Book Growth notebook: A Becoming Learner Book I hope these titles can help. I look forward to your creation!

What tips can help me start writing my first novel?

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2024-11-24 07:00

Begin by jotting down any ideas that come to your head, no matter how crazy they seem. You can later shape them into a proper story. Also, think about the theme of your novel. It could be about love, friendship, or adventure.

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