Would the following paragraph appeal to you as the beginning of a novel?

Would the following paragraph appeal to you as the beginning of a novel? [Preface] In my dream, youth, I will wander in the golden paddy field with poetic feelings; I will feel the friendship like a song in the fresh forest; I will wait for the picturesque love by the clear stream...
When time is struggling to survive, when time turns thousands of times, we will discover that the people who should be there are still there. It's just that in the season of youth, they have turned around in the same place!
I never thought that one day, I would be lost between dream and reality. During my youth, I took in all the good things. I don't know if I went in the wrong direction. I turned around in my youth. Is she still there? Where should I go?
If one day I know that I did something wrong, I won't look back! I believe that the people I will meet will meet even at the ends of the earth! In the time when we go against the road, we will understand each other's beauty more. We will miss each other in the time of existence, miss each other in the lost time, and when we meet again, we will learn to stick to the beauty of youth.

Answer 1

When night fell, the city became quiet, and only the sound of traffic was still noisy. A young woman was walking through a busy street with a black puppy in her hand. Her face was pale and her expression was tired, as if she had done something long and tedious all day. The puppy wagged its tail as if it was talking to the girl, but the girl couldn't hear a word.

The girl's house was not far away, but she did not want to go home today. She suddenly realized that she seemed to be lost. She began to worry, not knowing how to get home. As night fell, she felt lonely and helpless, as if the whole world had left her.

At this moment, she heard a voice. It was a familiar voice. She had heard and experienced this voice before. This voice told her that she could return to her home in a special way. However, she needed to find a way to prove that the voice was real and not just an illusion.

Thus, she embarked on an adventure to find her way home. She would face many difficulties and challenges, but she believed that as long as she persevered, she would find a way to go home.