Questions about literature

Spring outing…I heard the sound of flowers selling outside the street and knew that spring had arrived. He put on his clothes and went out. Unconsciously, he walked to the foot of the mountain. There were three or five shepherd boys sitting on the back of the ox, playing the flute and singing. Further ahead, there were green mountains and clear waters, white birds and red flowers, willows hanging green, peaches and plums piled up brocade. Looking up at the white clouds, looking down at the green grass…Soon, smoke rose from the chimneys, and the red wheel was about to fall, so he walked back. I wrote it down under the lamp.
During the Spring Festival, I came to Yuexiu Park with my family... We came to the Five Sheep Statue. Legend has it that one day, five immortals rode on five sheep and came to Guangzhou with ears of wheat. They distributed the ears of wheat to the people and taught them how to plant them. Later, the immortal returned to heaven and left behind five sheep, which later became stone sheep. From then on, these five sheep became the symbol of Guangzhou. I love Yuexiu Park.
Please read the two elementary school essays carefully. Which one do you think is more beautiful? Write your own reasons.

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