I wrote a fantasy novel. Can someone help me comment on it? I don't think the beginning is very good.

2024-09-05 03:49

Starting Point: Prologue of the Heavenly Dao

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2024-09-05 07:23

Of course, I can help you comment on your fantasy novel. First, let us look at the beginning of your novel: ``` Everything in the Otherworld Continent began with a mysterious ritual. ``` This opening was relatively simple, but it had a certain appeal. It mentioned a mysterious ritual that was closely linked to the history of the Otherworld. This opening could provide the reader with some background information to help them better understand the world in which the story took place. Next, let's take a look at the specific content of your novel: ``` The Ceremony Begins ``` The content of this first chapter is relatively simple, but it provides some important information for the reader. You can describe the history of the Otherworld Continent and the background and significance of the ritual in the novel. In addition, you can also describe the protagonist's first action in the novel, such as how he discovered the ritual and how he participated in the ritual. In addition, you can also describe some of the protagonist's personality traits in this chapter, such as his courage, intelligence, and wit. These descriptions could provide readers with more emotional resonance and help them better understand the protagonist. In general, although the beginning of your novel is simple, it has already provided some useful information to the readers through your efforts. You can continue to add more descriptions and details in your novel to enhance the reader's understanding of the story and emotional resonance.

I wrote a novel, maybe I think it's good, but I don't know how to put it on the shelves, there are some things I don't understand, I hope someone can help me

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2024-09-10 04:09

There were many factors to consider when a novel was published. 1. Choose the right platform: Different platforms may have different standards for the release of novels. You need to choose the platform that suits you best. Currently, the more commonly used platforms were Qidian Chinese Network, Genesis Chinese Network, Zongheng Chinese Network, and so on. 2. Submit the novel: After choosing a suitable platform, you need to submit the novel. The submission method may be different. Some platforms may need to pass the review before they can be put on the shelves. You need to read the relevant regulations of the platform carefully. 3. Release works: After submitting the novel, you need to wait for the platform to review it. If the review passes, you can publish the novel on the platform. When a novel was put on the shelves, one had to pay attention to the word count, theme, style, and other requirements. [4. Promo novel: After the novel is published, it needs to be publicized to attract more readers.] He could promote his novel through social media, forums, and other means. He could also work with other authors to promote it. Putting a novel on the shelves was a process that required patience and skill. He needed to carefully read the relevant rules of the platform and constantly improve his writing skills to attract more readers.

Can someone help me think of the name of a novel? I only read the beginning.

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2024-07-26 07:20

"A Survival Guide for a Supporting Character" is a light novel written by the author's name, Yao Yao Ling. It's a fantasy novel. The general plot of this novel is as follows: Dark history, don't look at dark history. ---------------------------- "The Shadow of the Beginning" was a suspense novel written by the author, a chubby little wolf cub. The general plot of the novel was: The fallen gods, the blank of history, we were born in pure white, we were born in light, we became part of the light, we are shadows that cannot be mentioned, we pursue the truth, we excavate ruins, we explore the mystery. Listen, it was the sorrowful cry of the past. Look, it was the sorrow of the past. Smelling, it was the lingering fragrance that had dissipated. Read, it's a lost civilization. Song of the Forgotten's group of readers has been established: Koukou seventy-five ninety-two seventy-three seventy-two. ---------------------------- Memory Corridor was a light novel written by Night Walker Z. It was a fantasy novel. The general plot of the novel was: Memories were a person's past, a person's memories, a person's treasure. At the same time, they could also change a person. Painful memories made people struggle, happy memories made people jump for joy, and painful memories made people work hard. In the long river of memories, there were always endless stories. Have you ever thought about what you would look like after losing all your memories? You don't remember the happiness, sadness, and past; You also don't remember your friends, relatives, and lovers; You don't even remember your name, occupation, or what you've experienced. Searching for oneself and retrieving lost memories was the theme of the Memory Corridor. However, the process of searching was a little difficult, painful, and often accompanied by danger. People desperately wanted to reach the end of the corridor, but what would be waiting for them at the end of the corridor? ---------------------------- "I Can Revise My Script" was a mystery novel written by the author, Little Fish Pond. The general plot of the novel was: My name is Qian Ye, and I'm a novelist. Three years ago, I met a girl called Youjian. I had a passionate relationship with her…But later, she disappeared. Just like that, she disappeared from my eyes and everyone's memories. I tried to find traces of her existence, but I couldn't find any information. One day, there were two more chapters of a strange novel in my draft box that I couldn't delete. At the end of the novel, there was someone shouting,"Save me!"... I was pulled into a horror novel, starting from a passerby…I am searching for her, I am redeeming myself. I can change the content of this novel world... [PS: Not in the first person][PPS: New book "Gradually Going Crazy" has been released. Welcome, everyone. Thank you.] ---------------------------- "The Road to Cultivating a Protagonist" was a fantasy romance novel written by the author, Chen Ni. The general plot of this novel was: She thought,'It's been more than three thousand years? Well, I'm running out of patience. There's not much time left. I might as well force my way out… Eh? This kid… Oh, just nice, it's him! Here, begin your path as the main character! "Huh?" What was going on? I only remember a flash of white light. Why did I change when I woke up? Could they have been captured by aliens? What was that? All-elemental constitution? A mage? What kind of place was this? Well…there was a mysterious person? She wants to help me? …Alright, I understand now. I am the legendary protagonist! (Clenching fist) The streamlined white light that passed by silently said,"I'm very innocent." P.S. Please recommend and collect all kinds of things. ---------------------------- "The Story of the Desolation" was a Xianxia, mythical, and cultivation novel written by a pen name that the author had missed. The general plot of this novel was: Chaos was just created, the world was just formed, all things were enlightened, and hundreds of races stood in the forest, each occupying a region. Later, it was rumored that the gods and devils of Kunlun established their capital and were called gods. They could live forever and reach the heavens. They could enslave hundreds of races and establish the capital of immortals to become the ruler of heaven and earth. This period of time was called the Pre-Desolate Era. ---------------------------- "You Call My Name" was a fantasy romance novel written by Yu Xiao 'er. The general plot of this novel was: In this life, I would rather let down the world than let you down. ---------------------------- "Life Against the Current 1978" was a novel about urban life written by the author, Infinite Stars V. The general plot of this novel was: Starting from scratch, he created a name. After rebirth, the young man made contributions and made up for his regrets. ---------------------------- "Book of the Past" was an ancient romance novel written by the author, Ye Yixi. The general plot of this novel was: Gu Xinian had died, but he had come back to life as a book. She had a new father. Although her father wasn't very reliable, she had a younger sister. Although her younger sister didn't like her at first, she later met an older brother who was four or five years older than her. However, she wanted to be her father wholeheartedly…However, this was not a big deal. The main point was, why was this person, whom she had only met briefly, looking for her and saying that she was very important to him? Searching for the solution, waiting online, quite urgent... ---------------------------- "Reborn as the Great Demon King" was a light novel written by the author, He Qiliao. It was a fantasy novel. The general plot of this novel was: He had been reborn. He even said that I wasn't a human, that I was the Great Demon King, and that he wanted me to conquer and dominate the world. He even had a daughter for no reason… What was wrong with this world? The story of an ordinary person becoming a demon king. Destruction! Destruction! The world was at his feet. Newcomer's new book, please add it to your collection, please click on it, please recommend it.

I wrote an article about Daji. I'd like to ask someone with good writing skills to help me comment.

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2024-08-10 00:54

Daji was a famous beauty in ancient Chinese legends. It was said that because of her charming smile and charming posture, she had become synonymous with a witch. Her story was portrayed in many novels, movies, and TV series as a classic image in Chinese culture. From a historical point of view, the image of Daji was not completely fictional but came from the description of ancient palace women. According to legend, Daji was an extremely seductive woman. Her beauty and charming posture were irresistible. It was said that she had once seduced King Zhou of the Shang Dynasty with her beauty and helped him do many cruel things, such as cutting off King Zhou's ears and nose and throwing them into a wine cup. In literature, the image of Daji was often described as a very charming and flirtatious woman. Her eyes and smile were always irresistible. The image of Daji was also used as the theme of literary works and movies such as The Romance of the Gods and The Legend of Daji. However, it should be noted that although the story of Daji is true, it is also regarded by many as a cruel and dark legend. In literature, Daji was often portrayed as a very charming and flirtatious woman. Her eyes and smile were always irresistible, but at the same time, she was also portrayed as a cold and heartless killer. Her heart was full of darkness and distortion. In general, Daji was a very classic and complex image. Her appearance not only reflected the lifestyle of ancient palace women, but also reflected the dark side of human nature. Whether it's a real character in history or the image of Daji in literature, it's an image worthy of our deep thought and discussion.

I wrote an ancient novel, but I can't think of a title. Please help me choose one.

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2024-08-22 20:18

The name of Gu Yan's novel can be referred to the following suggestions: 1. Dreaming back to the brothel ("Dreaming back" means returning to ancient times and "brothel" refers to the residence of prostitutes) 2. The phoenix seeks the phoenix ("Phoenix" means that the phoenix is a mythical beast in ancient legends, and "seeking the phoenix" means pursuing happiness) 3. Travel through the brothel (By traveling back to ancient times, the word "brothel" was added to highlight the time-traveling plot of the story) 4. Beauty Tribulation ("Beauty" refers to a beautiful woman and "Tribulation" means that she has experienced misfortune or danger) 5. A beauty in troubled times ("troubled times" refers to turbulent times and "beauty" refers to beautiful women) I hope these suggestions will be helpful. I wish the novel will be written better and better!

I want to write a novel, help me think of a beginning

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2024-09-13 08:03

Writing a novel requires a good beginning that can attract the readers 'attention and make them want to continue reading. Here are some suggestions that might be helpful: A fascinating scene: The beginning should make the reader feel nervous and excited, such as a dangerous and unknown place or a moment full of suspense and secrets. 2. An eye-catching protagonist: The protagonist should be the core of the novel, with a distinct personality and characteristics that can attract readers 'interest. 3. A clear storyline: The beginning should clearly describe the storyline and let the reader know what will happen next. 4. A concise introduction: The introduction should be short and powerful, allowing the reader to quickly understand the theme and purpose of the novel. 5. A fascinating dialogue: You can use a dialogue to attract the reader's attention, such as a tense conversation between characters or a mysterious character revealing secrets to you. The following was a possible start: When night fell, the quiet streets were only dotted with dim yellow street lamps. A young man holding a dagger was quietly jogging along the street. Who was he? Why would he appear here? His heart was filled with doubt, but at the same time, he was also nervous and excited. He knew that this moment was about to change his life.

I've read a novel, but I can't remember its name. Can someone help me think of it?

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2024-09-12 03:52

Alright, I can help you think of a name for your novel. According to the information you provided, this novel may be a fantasy or fantasy novel. One of the characters was called " Su Fei." He was an extraordinary swordsman and had a mysterious mentor. This mentor might have an important influence on his growth and development. In addition, this story may involve some mysterious magic or artifacts that will shock and curiosity you. I hope this information can help you remember the name of this novel!

I wrote a fantasy novel, hoping that the Bookworm would comment on it. very grateful

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2024-08-11 01:18

Thank you very much for your support! The fantasy novel that you wrote is called " Fantasy Divine Comedy ". It tells the story of a young man who has the power of God and experiences various fantasy adventures in the process of pursuing the mystery of his birth. As a fantasy novel, I think the main feature of Divine Comedy lies in its worldview and setting. In this book, the world was divided into two parts, Heaven and Earth. Humans and Protoss lived in the "Heaven" where Heaven and Earth met, while demons and monsters lived in the "Land". There were all kinds of mysterious powers and magic in this world, such as divine power, demonic power, spiritual power, and so on. These powers not only filled the world with infinite possibilities, but also made the entire story more colorful. In addition, Divine Comedy had a very moving plot and wonderful characters. The story was full of suspense and surprises. The mystery of the protagonist's life, the battle scenes, and the interpersonal relationships filled the readers with anticipation and excitement. At the same time, the protagonist's growth process was very natural, allowing the readers to truly feel his changes and progress. Finally, I hope that Divine Comedy will maintain the author's usual writing style and continue to write more unforgettable stories and characters. I wish you a happy writing and continue to bring us more wonderful works!

A name from a novel. I wrote a fantasy novel. I don't know the name of the male lead. Please help me think about it. The male lead is a little cold, but very talented.

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2024-08-25 15:54

The name of the male lead could be considered from the following aspects: 1. Start with the character of the male protagonist: The male protagonist is cold but very talented. You can consider using names with similar characters such as calm, rational, arrogant, etc. 2. Start with the male protagonist's profession. If the male protagonist is a character in a fantasy novel, you can consider using a name related to the fantasy profession, such as the Heavenly Demon, God of War, Divine Sword, etc. 3. Start with the meaning of the male protagonist's name: Some names can be considered from the meaning of the name. For example, the male protagonist's name contains words with the meaning of talent, indifference, etc. You can consider integrating these meanings into his name, such as "Talent Cold","Unfeeling Sword", etc. I hope these suggestions will be helpful. Happy writing!

"I wrote a fantasy novel. The protagonist was very powerful from the beginning. I don't know if this kind of book will be recognized by everyone."

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2024-08-24 05:29

It was quite common for web novels to have a strong protagonist from the beginning because fantasy novels usually explored mysterious worlds and pursued power as the theme. However, this kind of setting also needed to be considered according to the story and character shaping. If the protagonist's ability was too prominent, it might make the reader feel a little abrupt or uncomfortable. Make sure that the novel attracts the reader's attention and that the reader finds it interesting and fascinating. In addition to the protagonist's ability setting, he also needed to consider the storyline and character relationships, as well as the narrative and emotional expression of the entire story. If the plot and the characters of the novel could be presented well, it might be recognized and loved by the readers. It was suggested that the author should listen to the opinions and feedback of the readers during the writing process and constantly improve and perfect the novel.

I can't think of a plot for a novel, who can help me think of it?

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2024-07-20 09:27

I can't think of a plot to write a novel. Who can help me think of it? Of course, as a fan of web novels, I can help you come up with some plots. First of all, you can consider an interesting protagonist who wakes up in a strange world to find that he has become a person with superpowers. The protagonist could start exploring the world and meet many interesting people and things. Secondly, you can consider a villain who wants to control the world and achieve his goals at all costs. The protagonist could engage in fierce battles with the villain and gradually understand the villain's motives and plans in the battle. In addition, you can also consider an unexpected event such as the protagonist suddenly being involved in a mysterious conspiracy or finding himself trapped in an unexpected place. This kind of plot can make the reader feel nervous and excited. In addition, you can also consider some reverse plots, such as the protagonist originally thought that he had found the answer, but in fact, he was in even more trouble. This kind of plot could surprise the readers. In short, there are many plots that can be used to inspire your creativity. You can design the story according to your own preferences and ideas.