" Devour the Starry Sky " received a lot of criticism, mainly in the following areas: - ** Scriptwriter **: Poor scriptwriter ability, illogical problems. For example, in the universe genius battle storyline, it was first set to have one life per person, and death meant elimination. However, after Luo Feng killed Devil, Devil could still participate in the battle, this went against the previous settings. The animation increased the conflict between the characters, creating an internal conflict, such as letting Brolin and Luo Feng have a conflict, not letting Nabini and Luo Feng unite against the enemy, this didn't fit the logic of the characters in the original novel, it belittled the Black Dragon Mountain emperor and the Virtual Universe Company. Also, Hargrey and Brolin made Nabini cheat and let him take drugs in order to get rid of Luo Feng. This scene ignored the Virtual Universe Company's detection ability, and taking drugs in the virtual battle itself wasn't logical. - ** Magical plot changes **: The original plot has been seriously altered. The battle between the pinnacle geniuses of the universe was originally a great highlight of the original novel, but Luo Feng's battle in the animation was magically altered. In the original novel, Luo Feng killed his enemies all the way, but in the animation, Luo Feng fought with a 50 - 50 chance. He would be beaten up first, forced into a desperate situation, and then he would fight back. This kind of routine lacked novelty, making the originally exciting plot dull. - [Production: Cut corners at the climax of the plot, especially when it comes to character performance and emotional communication.] For example, Luo Feng and Rong Jun were training hard in primal chaos city to study the tablet's plot. It should have been a small climax, but it was made into a farce by the animation team, disappointing the audience. The novel " Devour the Starry Sky 2: Land of Origin " is equally exciting. Everyone is welcome to click and read it!
Chapter 198, "Clearing Meridians, Breakthrough Imminent (Part 2)", is the clearest early answer because Xia Chuan finally turns buildup into a real advancement. It opens with Regarding cultivation, it doesn't allow him any carelessness. and closes on The beast blood reserve is not ample, it's a bit tight." Xia Chuan,....
Chapter 179, "Tigers Fall, Insights and Fond Hearts [Happy New Year]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Xia Chuan's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from The Xuanwu Team, only consisted of seven people in total. to With my brother's strength, you can't possibly capture him..
Chapter 114, "New House, New Rules, New Beginning [Four-in-One Mega Chapter]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Great Xia's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Hong Mu once again asked the question he was most concerned about,... to What they didn't expect was the allocation based on family units..
Chapter 168, "Snow Bamboo, Longyou, Sudden Wealth", is the clearest early answer because it turns Xia Hong's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with Chief, the corpses from earlier have all vanished. and closes on How to manage and integrate these over three thousand people will.... The key payoff is that the chapter closes with "Chief, this is called Snow Bamboo. The spiky layer outside can autonomously sense and attack enemies from the front.
Chapter 193, "The Army, The Beast Tide, Little Snow Mane", is the clearest early answer because it turns Hunting Teams's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Soon, some people from the former Mirror Immortal Camp spoke up to... and follows through with Run, run, everyone scatter and flee....
Chapter 106, "Expand the Hunting Grounds, Camp Expansion [3-in-1]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Xia Hong's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Xia Hong maintained a calm expression and nodded. and follows through with If not for Xia Chuan having the Wood Puppet Black Blade, leaving him....
Chapter 141, "Intermediate Thunder Kui, Second Reshaping Skin [Three in One]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Cold Beast's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Not only that, but above the Ice Tree, lightning occasionally... to Unexpectedly, we encountered an Intermediate one before even hunting.... What makes it stick is that the chapter closes with The swamp beside the tree was likely the Thunder Kui's habitat.
Chapter 43, "Deceitful Monster - Humanity's Common Enemy", is the clearest early answer because it turns Luo Ming's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with The Wood Puppet Monster is a problem that all camps around Redwood... and closes on But before he could start, Yang Ning stood up from his seat, stopped....
Chapter 183, "Population Explosion, Valley Planning", is the clearest early answer because it turns Great Xia's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with The wooden building only had 740 rooms in total, which means, on... and follows through with Seeing the two about to speak, Xia Chuan quickly raised his hand: "No....
Chapter 127, "Breakthrough Ideas for Cold Resistance Level", is the clearest early answer because Xia Chuan finally turns buildup into a real advancement. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on Cold Resistance Level..." Xia Hong softly chanted twice, filled with... and ending on So, when they heard Luo Yuan was directly awarded one thousand....