What is the quality of the raw translation of 'Harukanaru Jikuu no Naka de' manga?

Chapter 184, ", Treatment of C9 Level Employees", is the clearest early answer because Alliance Production Department finally turns buildup into a real advancement. The setup is By the final stage, Gu Hang had completely lost the ability to..., but the pressure keeps building through Mainly, it was Hu Ke speaking, and even Wu Jiarong appeared to....

Chapter 151, ", It's So Big, So Green", is the clearest early answer because it turns Orcs's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with During this process, their numbers would slowly spiral upwards. and follows through with It sounded more like a Green Skin Orc rallying its comrades with a....

Chapter 139, ", Just Because He Is the Governor?", is the clearest early answer because it turns Swan's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Swan had actually eavesdropped for quite a while before entering the... and follows through with With a smile, Swan announced: "Then from this moment on, Rubbish Town....

Chapter 189, ", Allied Air Force, Ace Pilot Requests to Enter the Battle!", is the clearest early answer because a shaky connection becomes usable in the plot. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Ace pilot, requesting to engage!" "Enemy spotted at twelve o'clock!"... and follows through with Three bio-artilleries were blasted into pulp along a straight line of....

Chapter 91, ", The Storm Trap", is the clearest early answer because it turns Storm Sorcery's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from The Battle Nuns were on the right track. to If things continued at this rate, in a few more hours, before the sun.... What makes it stick is that the chapter exposes hidden motives around Storm Sorcery, so readers can finally see how the conspiracy layer of the plot is actually moving.

Chapter 170, ", Mother (Extra 7,000 words)", is the clearest early answer because it turns Pei Desi's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is You see, after he had an idea, the first person he contacted was me,..., but the pressure keeps building through Rage Owl Star always needs a governor, and since he has now made some....

Chapter 174, ", Loyal Heir Academy", is the clearest early answer because it turns Meisheke's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is He had once been the political commissar of the 7th Garrison Division..., but the pressure keeps building through He had distinguished himself when he actively led his troops to....

Chapter 188, ", Whistling In", is the clearest early answer because it turns Green Valley Region's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Jason Morgan was now somewhat panicked. to It was time to consider evacuation, moving people out..

Chapter 157, ", The Eve of the Star War", is the clearest early answer because the buildup finally cashes out in a real clash. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from With three thousand grace points in hand, Gu Hang felt the troubles... to When registering as an Imperial Merchant, the first and third items....

Chapter 53, ", The Second Governor General", is the clearest early answer because it turns Gu Hang's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is He stepped forward and gave Lambert a big hug, "I'm willing to trust..., but the pressure keeps building through After all, the guy brought a group of people with him, surrendered....