What are the flaws in the Flashpoint comic story?

Chapter 67, "Tying up after a Pyrrhic Victory", is the clearest early answer because it turns Yang Ning's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Strictly speaking, Yang Ning and Li Hu did nothing wrong. to Even Luo Ming couldn't help but show anger, let alone the ordinary....

Chapter 61, "Inch Knife", is the clearest early answer because it turns Luo Ming's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on Up until now, the iron weapons that Xia Hong had seen were basically... and ending on But in the next moment, everyone stood agape..

Chapter 105, "New Home Construction, Strength Bottleneck [Two in One]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Cold Beast's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Except for these few kinds, only the Cold Beasts are currently the... and follows through with Upon discovering that the current physical conditions of the camp....

Chapter 141, "Intermediate Thunder Kui, Second Reshaping Skin【Three in One】", is the clearest early answer because it turns Zhao Long's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is Deep in Redwood Ridge, an Intermediate Snow Mane with Iron Arrows..., but the pressure keeps building through It was blind and could only crash around based on instinct..

Chapter 141, "Intermediate Thunder Kui, Second Reshaping Skin [Three in One]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Ice Tree's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on Not only that, but above the Ice Tree, lightning occasionally... and ending on Unexpectedly, we encountered an Intermediate one before even hunting.... In story terms, the chapter closes with The swamp beside the tree was likely the Thunder Kui's habitat.

Chapter 490, "Battle On The Sea I", is the clearest early answer because the buildup finally cashes out in a real clash. The setup is Well I'll be damned," Torren muttered., but the pressure keeps building through That's a beast." Jessa leaned forward, eyes bright..

Chapter 521, "Storming The First Base II", is the clearest early answer because it turns Damien's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from He had walked less than a kilometer from the abandoned stronghold... to The creature roared and released a shockwave of dark essence outward..

Chapter 122, "Finally Started to Retreat [Three in One]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Xia Hong's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from More than a hundred people moving together create quite a spectacle. to The base of Chen Ye Camp was less than two kilometers from the valley.. What makes it stick is that the chapter closes with He did not speak;

Chapter 484, "Intercepting Attacks", is the clearest early answer because the buildup finally cashes out in a real clash. The setup is The wind howled against Skylar's wings as Damien soared northward,..., but the pressure keeps building through The towering walls, the barracks, the winding streets, and the people....

Chapter 135, "The Fearless Mirror Immortal [Three in One]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Snow Mane's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, Snow Mane could pretend to be dead, and pretend it did well.. By the end, The environment here was evidently much quieter than outside.. Inside the broader battle storyline, the chapter closes with In the end, its limbs finally went limp., which gives battle a stronger narrative position and pushes the power growth onward.