One reason could be that the dialogues lack depth and don't convey emotions well. Also, the pacing might be off, making it hard to stay engaged.
Maybe it's because the storylines are confusing or the character development is weak.
Poor writing skills in manhwa can stem from various factors. Sometimes, the world-building is not detailed enough, or the plot has too many holes and inconsistencies.
Chapter 142, "%, The Turmoil Brought by the Martial Arts Training Ground [8000-word Big Chapter, Subscription Request]", is the clearest early answer because a shaky connection becomes usable in the plot. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on [Camp: Great Xia (Level 0)] [Lord: Xia Hong] [Cultivation:... and ending on Let's hold off a bit, save up some resources, and upgrade the wooden....
Chapter 134, "Difficult Hunt [Warm Sun Giant Adds More 3/10]", is the clearest early answer because the buildup finally cashes out in a real clash. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Moreover, Xia Hong didn't just pull it out. and follows through with Facing these Iron Arrows, it couldn't even flee, only able to avoid....
Chapter 182, "Red Wood, Eye of Truth, Three Joys Arrive at the Door", is the clearest early answer because the hidden truth stops feeling like mere subtext. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on On the snowy ground, a black-clad figure slowly walked towards the... and ending on All three broadswords hit Xia Hong accurately; Meng Yuan aimed for....
Chapter 181, "What Does Great Xia Want, Liu Dahu's Ambition", is the clearest early answer because it turns Great Xia's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is He turned his head to look at Zhu Xing and Meng Yuan, discovering..., but the pressure keeps building through A cold smile crossed his face as he whispered, "Could it be you think....
Chapter 190, "Xia Li, 4 Articles, Someone is Coming", is the clearest early answer because it turns Xia Chuan's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, Xiao Ning was led through the crowd by her mother's hand, and as soon.... By the end, Xia Li" All eyes unconsciously focused on Qiu Peng beside Xia Chuan,.... Inside the broader power growth storyline, the chapter closes with To be honest, he certainly wanted these things, especially the aged wine.
Chapter 154, "Inheritance Rights, Strategic Contraction [Sorry for Being Late]", is the clearest early answer because Li Pingkai gets a payoff that changes the stakes. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Xia Hong was silent for a moment, then walked up to the three... and follows through with What he truly felt guilty about was hastily and rashly leading....
Chapter 215, "Teaching Luo Cheng Techniques, News of the Jade Bone (Part 3)", is the clearest early answer because Luo Cheng gets a payoff that changes the stakes. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on It's just that all three Cold Beasts were cut in half, clearly handed... and ending on But as soon as he took hold of it, he was nearly toppled by its....
Chapter 150, "Green Bamboo Fence and Marking Stone, Expanding Territory", is the clearest early answer because it turns Great Xia Station's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is In the past five days, the leader has used nearly six hundred pounds..., but the pressure keeps building through Killing Yuwen Hu is probably not a difficult task anymore..
Chapter 206, "Pleas, Cold Element Festival, the Leader Emerges (Part 2)", is the clearest early answer because it turns Lu Yang's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with Lu Yang, according to the Camp Supply Department's regulations, how... and closes on The drum sound resonated with earth-shaking might, causing not just....
Chapter 152, "Mirror Immortal's Killing Intent, Who Has Been Framed?", is the clearest early answer because the violence around Xia Hong becomes final instead of hypothetical. The setup is They plan to wipe us out in one fell swoop!" Xia Hong turned back to..., but the pressure keeps building through Seeing Yuwen Hu at the forefront, the murderous intent in Xia Hong's....