The English translation is decent. It conveys the main ideas and emotions pretty well.
Overall, the English translation of the Diabolik Lovers manga with Ayato is okay. Some parts might feel a bit stiff, but it's understandable for the most part. The names and key terms are translated accurately, which helps keep the story coherent.
Chapter 613, "When a Whale Falls, All Life Thrives", is the clearest early answer because it turns Shaobai's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Hearing He Wen's words, Shen Lan was so excited she nearly sprayed...
Chapter 439, "Never Question Sister Li", is the clearest early answer because it turns Sister Li's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with There was no helping it, she brought the man here, so even if he was...
Chapter 905, "I Plan to Quit the Circle", is the clearest early answer because it turns Is's situation into a concrete plot event.
Chapter 773, "I am the Trainee Here", is the clearest early answer because it turns Shiguang's situation into a concrete plot event.
Chapter 616, "I'm Going to Save Sister Xiao Wan!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Su Yinwan's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, Since the storm had hit that morning, he had been preoccupied and out....
Chapter 537, "Ding, Jiang Cheng's affinity drops by 10 points!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Jiang Li's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, Miss Su Yinwan immediately hung her head in dejection.. By the end, In this regard, he still held a slight advantage..
Chapter 440, "You Know Fengshui Array?!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Ji Yanbai's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on The scorching afternoon sun, wrapped with moist sea breeze, ascended...
Chapter 838, "Just Call Me Grandpa", is the clearest early answer because it turns Jiang Li's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Gu Qiang's expression was subtle as well.
Chapter 566, "New Game Begins!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Ai Xiaochun's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, How is that possible?" Luo Xuan frowned, "What's the rush?. By the end, I have a bad feeling about this.] [Wake up, when King Zheng speaks,....
Chapter 879, "Is it My Turn to Settle Accounts?", is the clearest early answer because it turns Su Yinwan's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, Jiang Li gave her a meaningful look.. By the end, At this moment, her expression completely turned cold..