To write a submissive male reader fanfic, start with the male reader's backstory. Maybe he had a difficult past that led him to be more submissive in nature. Then, when creating the dominant character, make them complex. They shouldn't just be bossy but have their own motives and insecurities. As you write the story, use descriptive language to show the power dynamics. For example, describe how the male reader lowers his eyes when the dominant character speaks. Include internal monologues for the male reader to show his thoughts about his submissive position and how it affects his growth throughout the story.
When writing a submissive male reader fanfic, think about the progression of the relationship. At the beginning, the submissive nature of the male reader can be more pronounced. But as the story unfolds, there can be a shift. Maybe he becomes more confident in some aspects while still remaining submissive overall. Also, pay attention to the dialogue. The dominant character's words should be firm but not overbearing. For the male reader, his responses can be hesitant or eager to please. You can also add elements of conflict from the outside world that test the submissive - dominant relationship, such as a rival trying to break the bond between them.
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