I would recommend 'Altered Carbon' which has a military - influenced dystopian future. The concept of body - swapping and the military - corporate control over society is quite interesting. There are powerful military - like entities that control different aspects of this world. Another good one is 'The Handmaid's Tale'. While it's more about a theocratic dystopia, there are elements of military - like enforcement of the regime's rules on the people, especially when it comes to controlling the movement and behavior of women.
One military dystopian novel is '1984' by George Orwell. Although it's not strictly only military - focused, the omnipresent military - like control in the totalitarian state makes it relevant. The Party uses military - style surveillance and enforcement to keep the populace in line. Also, 'Hunger Games' has military aspects within its dystopian world. The Capitol uses military force to maintain control over the districts, and the tributes are forced into a battle - arena which is a form of military - style competition.
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