Another one is 'Sunset Shimmer: Alicorn of Light'. In this, Sunset's Alicorn form is associated with the power of light. The story follows her as she battles against the forces of darkness, using her unique Alicorn abilities. It has a great plot that keeps you hooked from start to finish.
One great fanfic could be 'Sunset's Ascent'. It delves into Sunset Shimmer's journey as she discovers and adjusts to her new Alicorn form. It has interesting character development and explores her relationships with other ponies in this new phase of her life.
Chapter 667, ", must maintain respect for Gu Hang", is the clearest early answer because it turns Gu Hang's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from This is one of the nine planets in the Tianma Star Sector, and it... to Even Gu Hang thought his appetite might be a bit too big.. What makes it stick is that the chapter closes with Eventually, he let out a long sigh, "Don't be in a hurry, Pei Desi, don't be in a hurry...
Chapter 367, ", remember, remember", is the clearest early answer because it turns Star Domain Government's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Do you want to transform Korolya Battle Zone into a six-year regimen... to But if during this period, the Star Domain Government finds that the....
Chapter 434, "Assassination", is the clearest early answer because it turns Arno's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is They saw the gun in Arno's hand., but the pressure keeps building through Arno fired three times in quick succession, three pale purple beams.... Once the chapter lands on Arno made a judgement, muted his footsteps, and approached silently., the chapter closes with Zelos was very special in her position.
Chapter 367, ", remember, remember", is the clearest early answer because it turns Lois's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Do you want to transform Korolya Battle Zone into a six-year regimen... and follows through with The Star Domain Government will be watching, and if things in Korolya....
Chapter 389, ", Capturing the Planet", is the clearest early answer because it turns Imperial Army's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is Every officer present was required to lead a battalion personally to..., but the pressure keeps building through The veterans of the Star Realm Army, who were mustering outside the....
Chapter 410, ", Don't Be Too Honest", is the clearest early answer because it turns Gu Hang's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from The trip to Extinct Soil Star posed a challenge for Gu Hang,... to This also made Gu Hang's monthly income skyrocket.. What makes it stick is that the chapter closes with But it doesn't matter, the Empire won't be so stringent.
Chapter 459, ", Cruiser Technology!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Steel Wing Star's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on In no time, merely half a year later, Gu Hang was able to see on the... and ending on The other part was the income from annihilating the Ashen Dead Squad,.... In story terms, the chapter closes with Ordinarily, Gu Hang needn't worry about the level elevation;
Chapter 446, ", Mutinous Interstellar Warriors", is the clearest early answer because the buildup finally cashes out in a real clash. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Gu Hang's thinking was quite natural: knowing that Green Skin... to The Green Skin command system began to recover, no longer as.... What makes it stick is that the danger stops being abstract and the conflict around Alliance Army becomes immediate, forcing the surrounding cast to react under pressure.
Chapter 442, ", Annihilation Battle is More Effective", is the clearest early answer because the buildup finally cashes out in a real clash. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from At this point, the Beastman leaders of each troop were all fired up,... to Charge, cleave through limbs, sever weapons, kill the drivers....
Chapter 432, ", Fighting a War is Like Burning Money", is the clearest early answer because the buildup finally cashes out in a real clash. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Arno Chinko, this is Osenia's younger brother. to And indeed, Isaacson didn't consider the identity issue at all,.... What makes it stick is that the danger stops being abstract and the conflict around faction conflict becomes immediate, forcing the surrounding cast to react under pressure.