Some disturbing fanfiction might involve extreme and out - of - character violence. For example, writing about a beloved character like Hermione being brutally tortured in a very graphic way that goes against the spirit of the original series. Another could be creating really dark and twisted relationships that are not in line with the positive themes of the books, like forcing a romantic connection between characters that is completely inappropriate.
One type of disturbing Harry Potter fanfiction might be those that desecrate the memory of the dead characters in a cruel way. For instance, bringing back a dead character like Sirius Black just to subject him to more pain and suffering in the fan - made story. It's disturbing because it plays with the emotions of the readers who have an attachment to these characters from the original books. Also, some might create a dystopian version of the wizarding world where all the magic is used for malevolent purposes, which is a far cry from the somewhat idealized world in the original series.
Chapter 238, "Decisive Victory, Admonition, Hou Tong's Plan (Part 3)", is the clearest early answer because it turns Peng Bo's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Hearing these words, everyone's expressions showed slight emotion. and follows through with Thus, if these two want to reach Zhaoyang, they must cross this plain....
Chapter 227, "The Gate Scam, the Third Wave, and Yuwen Dao of Great Xia", is the clearest early answer because it turns Wu Tianxing's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on Stop him!" Hou Ming shouted urgently, and upon hearing his voice, Hou... and ending on The sudden dramatic change left not just Chen Yingba, but everyone....
Chapter 232, "Saving Lives, Putting on an Act, Xia City in Uproar [8,000-Word Chapter, More to Come]", is the clearest early answer because the rescue effort creates visible on-page results. It opens with Peng Bo, a Superior Battle Body with the strength of Eight-maned, was... and closes on Clang...… The staff came down for another fierce strike; though Peng....
Chapter 320, "Prototype of the Governmental State, Intensive Follow-Up Arrangements (Part 3)", is the clearest early answer because it pushes Xia Chuan into a new phase or setting. It opens with In this way, the entire camp is still largely controlled by the Six... and closes on The Seventh Prison Department can be established first..
Chapter 208, "Great Xia Sacred Pattern, Building Upgrades (Part 3)", is the clearest early answer because Redwood Ridge finally turns buildup into a real advancement. It opens with The resources needed for the next upgrade of these buildings are not... and closes on Although the Cold Element Festival lasts fifteen days, the grand.... The key payoff is that it turns Redwood Ridge's growth into a concrete upgrade step and sets up the next payoff in the power growth storyline linked to Great Xia.
Chapter 302, "Signs of Defeat Emerge, Snow Bamboo's Trump Card", is the clearest early answer because it turns Chen Yingyuan's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is The defenders kept falling, even those at the Cold Resistance Level..., but the pressure keeps building through It's essential to know, due to the suppression from the main....
Chapter 236, "White Dew Gu, Despairing Yuwen Dao, Yang Lu", is the clearest early answer because it turns Yangyuan Peak's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with After all, Yang Lu is a giant camp, with a population of just over... and follows through with Therefore, facing the third uprising of the hostages, he no longer....
Chapter 242, "Long Mountain Causes Trouble, You Are Too Late (Part 3)", is the clearest early answer because it turns Luo Yuan's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on They've been pursuing Wu Xiong for so long that there should be quite... and ending on Yet, with Xia Chuan's pulling force, he made a rapid retreat....
Chapter 289, "Crushing, Stalling for Time, Ning Yuan Hill's Decisive Victory", is the clearest early answer because it turns Long Mountain's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, The tactics of the White Dew Gu are indeed too strong; if we allow it.... By the end, The thirteen came from the southwest, presumably departing from Long....
Chapter 257, "Building a Straight Road, the Beast Meat Issue", is the clearest early answer because it turns Mirror Valley's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from The dividing line of a day in the Ice Abyss is determined by dawn. to Of the 1,014 prisoners, how many are of the Earth-digging Realm?"....