The pace of time should match the mood of the story. In a tense, action - packed scene, time might seem to move quickly. You can write it like 'Seconds turned into minutes as he raced against the ticking bomb.' But in a more reflective or sad moment, time could slow down. 'The hours dragged on as she sat by the hospital bed, watching her loved one slip away.'
Consistency is key. If you start a chapter in the morning and then suddenly the characters are acting as if it's midnight without proper transition, it can confuse the reader. So, make sure the flow of time is logical.
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