Maybe he's fed up because the fanfiction often misrepresents the Order's values or actions. In some fanfictions, the Order might be depicted in a way that doesn't align with how he knows them, which could be frustrating.
Well, one reason could be that the fanfiction focuses too much on the Order at the expense of other important aspects of his world. Harry has a whole life full of different relationships, challenges, and events. If the fanfiction hones in on the Order to the point where it feels like the other elements are being ignored or distorted, he would be fed up. For instance, if his friendships with Ron and Hermione are sidelined in the fanfiction just to focus on the Order's activities, that would be a major turn - off for him.
Chapter 899, "It's actually a seal script?!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Rong Kexi's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, Jiang Cheng, with his head dizzy, was pulled into the courtyard by....
Chapter 572, "Only Second in the Country", is the clearest early answer because it turns Bai Lu's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Little brother, this is a competition, and I won't go easy on you...
A practical answer is Chapter 2, because it turns the idea into a concrete scene. The chapter opens with On the top floor of the Financial Building, a gathering of dark clouds..., adds pressure through In my opinion, Mother should kick out this troublemaker who's a stranger., and ends on Jiang.
Chapter 609, "What identity would make the Crown Prince barbecue!", is the clearest early answer because the hidden truth stops feeling like mere subtext. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Jiang Yan: "!!!" Right, the Cat and Mouse Game was over, they had...
Chapter 572, "Only Second in the Country", is the clearest early answer because it turns Bai Lu's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Little brother, this is a competition, and I won't go easy on you...
Chapter 729, "Beauties Often Have Tragic Fates", is the clearest early answer because it turns Jiang Li's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from In the deep of winter, the Capital experienced several heavy...
Chapter 798, "How to Be a Dad? You Don't Even Care About Your Child!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Jiang Mingchuan's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on Jiang Bufan sniffed hard and took a step back.
Chapter 704, "Even if I were a slave, I would be willing!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Jiang Li's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Wu Daoshan looked at Zhao Lang in shock.
Chapter 839, "Because There's a Good Show to Perform", is the clearest early answer because it turns Kexi's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with But don't worry." Gu Qiang said, holding Shi Lei's hand, "The...
Chapter 863, "Your Marriage is a Calamity", is the clearest early answer because a shaky connection becomes usable in the plot. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with The raffle results came out quickly. and follows through with Things have been smooth sailing between us..