Character development is a big characteristic. In non - adult fanfiction, we can see them grow without any inappropriate content. For example, in 'Rukia's Guidance', Toshiro learns from Rukia's experiences and becomes more empathetic. The setting within the Bleach universe, like Soul Society or the human world, should be well - described to give a sense of authenticity. Another aspect is the relationship between them, which can be friendship or a deep comradeship as in 'Toshiro and Rukia: The Unbreakable Bond' where they face a powerful enemy together and their bond is strengthened.
Good non - adult fanfiction about Toshiro and Rukia often focuses on their unique personalities. Toshiro is cold and serious, while Rukia is more warm - hearted. Their interactions based on these personalities, like in 'The Ice and the Heart' where Toshiro slowly opens up to Rukia, are important. Also, a good plot that involves their Shinigami duties and how they help each other in that regard is key.
One characteristic is the exploration of their backstories in a non - adult way. Fanfictions like 'Toshiro's Past Revealed by Rukia' can dig into their pasts and how it affects their present relationship. The dialogue should be in - character. In 'A Day in the Life of Toshiro and Rukia', their conversations are very much like how they would talk in the original series. Also, the fanfiction should add something new to their relationship, not just repeat what's already in the official story, like in 'Toshiro and Rukia: A Different Path' which takes them on an adventure that's not in the original plot but still stays true to their characters.
If you want the clearest chapter reference, go to Chapter 76. Early on, Thinking of this, the aunt repeatedly praised, "Girl, hearing your words...; later, the chapter leans on I'll go back and tell this to my child; he will definitely be motivated to....
A practical answer is Chapter 74, because it turns the idea into a concrete scene. The chapter opens with Having seen Jiang Li's ID before, he knew that this person named Shiguang..., adds pressure through It's not just a banner we are talking about;
Chapter 81 is the strongest chapter-level answer because it starts from Qi Tianyu, who chose curry beef rice, received a piece of curry and a... and follows through on The summer on the Southwest Plateau is no joke; the sun at three o'clock....
Chapter 78 is the strongest chapter-level answer because it starts from He Yun, too, tidied up and walked over to rest in the shade of a tree. and follows through on [HAHAHA, is it just me or does Movie Emperor He seem to be showing off a....
The best chapter pointer here is Chapter 79, "Finally, I'm not the last one anymore!". It opens with Jiang Li leisurely said, "I bought this weeding machine, and according to... and closes on Um..." Wen Jiaojiao bit her lip, "Could you, could you lend me the weeding....
Look to Chapter 77 for the clearest answer. It begins with Wen Jiaojiao's reminder calmed Shu Yan down., keeps building through Indeed, the wild mushrooms on the Southwest Plateau were complex in..., and lands on But who knew that the next second, the lottery box would be handed over to....
Chapter 80 is the strongest chapter-level answer because it starts from Jiang Yan and Wen Jiaojiao, one so smug he was almost ascending to the... and follows through on arrogant princess with Princess Disease, I'm totally for it, fam.] [Hahaha....
A practical answer is Chapter 93, because it turns the idea into a concrete scene. The chapter opens with Jiang Li looked back and saw several aunties linking arms, walking up the..., adds pressure through Even if they were hiring actors, could they really come up with such an..., and ends on I.
If you want the clearest chapter reference, go to Chapter 73. Early on, Director Sun, tongue-tied, finally managed to squeeze out a sentence,...; later, the chapter leans on But isn't it due to your production team's lack of consideration?.
A practical answer is Chapter 64, because it turns the idea into a concrete scene. The chapter opens with Chixia Village lay in tranquil slumber., adds pressure through Is there really a need to put her down like this?, and ends on He'd been a host for so many years; he was used to it..