In fanfic, Christopher can be a villain because of his overall unreliability. Throughout Gilmore Girls, he has shown that he can't be counted on. He fails to be a proper father figure to Rory and a reliable partner to Lorelai. Fanfic writers may expand on this by showing how his actions have long - term negative effects on the characters. For instance, his indecisiveness about his relationship with Lorelai can be turned into a more malicious trait in fanfic, where he might be purposely toying with her emotions or causing problems for her and Rory just because he can't get his own life sorted out.
Christopher's actions in the original show give fanfic writers a lot to work with. His leaving Lorelai when she was pregnant was a huge blow. In fanfic, this can be further explored as a very villainous act. Also, his attempts to interfere in Lorelai's relationships later on, without really being a stable part of her life, can be painted as villain - like behavior. He seems to disrupt Lorelai's life rather than contribute positively, which is why he can be made into a villain in fanfic.
Chapter 252, "Final Test In Hell", is the clearest early answer because it turns Damon's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from The sky above the First Layer of Hell burned in its usual eternal... to As Damon sped through the battlefield, collecting his tenth core and.... What makes it stick is that the chapter closes with "You'll find out soon enough., which gives battle a stronger narrative position and pushes the exploration onward.
Chapter 134, "What Now?", is the clearest early answer because it turns Elder White Fang's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with The grand chamber echoed with murmurs and arguments, pressure filling... and closes on These young talents were the future of their armies, but their.... The key payoff is that the chapter closes with Damien's silver eyes met hers, a faint smirk playing on his lips. "Now? We prepare for what's coming.
Chapter 116, "Almost Time", is the clearest early answer because it turns Almost Time's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is In the heart of a small, quiet town, a modest building stood tucked..., but the pressure keeps building through Inside, two figures sat across from one another at a low table,....
Chapter 420, "No Peace For The Wicked", is the clearest early answer because it turns Damien's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with But Damien's gaze swept over the fallen men, his thoughts darker. and follows through with And as always, Damien knew puzzles had sharp edges..
Chapter 178, "The 'Friendly' Competition", is the clearest early answer because it turns Crowgarth Institution's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is As the dawn painted the sky in hues of orange and gold, the sun began..., but the pressure keeps building through Outside the teleportation hall of their academy, three students stood....
Chapter 324, "The Trial of Divergence I", is the clearest early answer because it turns Damon's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, The four of them walked in silence.. By the end, She looks like the type that remembers everyone she's beaten," Daveon.... Inside the broader power growth storyline, the chapter closes with "This is the Trial of Divergence," Oryll declared. "And it begins...
Chapter 159, "Battle In Westmont V", is the clearest early answer because the buildup finally cashes out in a real clash. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with The battle was a maelstrom of chaos. and follows through with His hidden card was finally usable one again..
Chapter 377, "Kellen's Wild Actions", is the clearest early answer because it turns Reiz's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with The arena shifted again — carving a wide, solid dueling platform... and follows through with He just looked up at the board..
Chapter 435, "Finding Their Gate", is the clearest early answer because it turns Arielle's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from The sky above Delwig's outskirts burned a dim copper. to She crouched and brushed away loose soil with her hand.. What makes it stick is that the chapter closes with Damien straightened slowly, eyes narrowing toward the ground.
Chapter 298, "Meeting At ElderGlow", is the clearest early answer because it turns Damon's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with At ElderGlow Academy, the rising sun painted the eastern sky in... and follows through with But still, there was one person left….