A good fanfic should have well - developed characters. It should stay true to the personalities of Bea and Allie from the original source. For example, Bea's tough exterior but with a soft heart for those she cares about, and Allie's charm and her ability to get into trouble.
The plot is also crucial. It could be something that explores their relationship further, like how they deal with challenges in their relationship within the prison setting. Maybe a story where they have to face a new inmate who tries to come between them, and how they overcome it together. This kind of engaging plot can make a fanfic really good.
Good writing style matters a great deal. The use of vivid descriptions to bring the prison environment to life, the dialogues that feel natural between the two characters. If the writer can make you feel as if you are right there in the prison, watching Bea and Allie's story unfold, then it's a great fanfic. Also, the ability to create tension and resolve it in a satisfying way is a sign of a well - written Bea Smith and Allie Novak fanfic.
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