Avoid themes that distort the characters' personalities just for the sake of the inappropriate 'lemon yaoi' aspect. The Sasuke and Naruto relationship is complex and deep in the original story, and fanfiction should respect that rather than using them in improper ways for adult - themed content.
Well, obviously the adult and inappropriate themes should be avoided. Fanfiction should be more about exploring the relationship in a positive and healthy way. Themes like excessive sexualization are not suitable.
Chapter 446, ", Mutinous Star Warriors", is the clearest early answer because the buildup finally cashes out in a real clash. It opens with If it were only members of the Marine Corps, that would be one thing,... and closes on How could they possibly get the help of Interstellar Warriors?!. The key payoff is that the danger stops being abstract and the conflict around Interstellar Warriors becomes immediate, forcing the surrounding cast to react under pressure.
Chapter 471, ", Victory Strategy", is the clearest early answer because it turns Green Skins's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, Golden Pass Star Sector is an important location, not just speaking.... By the end, This would fatally affect the efficiency of material transfer.. Inside the broader faction conflict storyline, the danger stops being abstract and the conflict around faction conflict becomes immediate, forcing the surrounding cast to react under pressure.
Chapter 493, ", The Enemy is in Terra!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Gu Hang's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with One banquet after another, one meeting after another, one social... and closes on In his words: "I've risen through the ranks at breakneck speed in....
Chapter 27, "Burning Through Essence", is the clearest early answer because it turns Damien's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is Damien thought for a moment before coming up with a feasible solution..., but the pressure keeps building through He was out of essence and although he had life force to convert,....
Chapter 137, "A Little Thief", is the clearest early answer because it turns Damien's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Over the bustling streets, the rising sun shone down but there was... to It'll be a warning to the others." When one man suggested burning the....
Chapter 458, ", You Dare Too?", is the clearest early answer because it turns Shannon Corporation's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from This man was the second largest landowner on Eagle Horse III, a... to If they dared, why would they be bluffing in fear here?.
Chapter 242, "Obtaining A Grade Four Essence Core", is the clearest early answer because it turns Garrick's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with The relay center was a fortress of efficiency, a nerve center... and follows through with Oh, come on—" His words were cut off as he, Anaya, and Daveon were....
Chapter 158, "Field Trip II", is the clearest early answer because it turns Leana's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, Dean Godsthorn office was a picture of order and simplicity.. By the end, I've grown fond of the trio, as challenging as they can be.. Inside the broader faction conflict storyline, the chapter closes with As the trio exchanged determined glances, Leana allowed herself a moment of satisfaction.
Chapter 233, "Battle In A Lake", is the clearest early answer because the buildup finally cashes out in a real clash. The setup is Gaahh!!" Damien's eyes snapped open, and he immediately tensed, his..., but the pressure keeps building through The familiar walls of his room at the Mercenary Guild were gone..
Chapter 108, "A Warning Letter And A Request Letter", is the clearest early answer because the hidden truth stops feeling like mere subtext. It opens with Shoooooong~ The golden glow of the teleportation array faded, and the... and closes on I'll be delivering an important message to the Emperor shortly." Once.... The key payoff is that the danger stops being abstract and the conflict around faction conflict becomes immediate, forcing the surrounding cast to react under pressure.