It's an interesting but controversial concept. On one hand, it shows the creativity of fanfiction writers to explore such an unexpected relationship dynamic. But on the other hand, it goes against the established relationships in the original story. It might also make some fans uncomfortable as it involves cheating, which is generally not a positive or morally - upstanding theme. But if it's written well, it could potentially add a new layer of complexity to the characters and their relationships.
I think it's a rather dark and unfaithful take on the characters. In the original Harry Potter lore, Lily was in love with James. However, fanfiction is all about exploring different possibilities, but this one might not sit well with a lot of fans who have a more traditional view of the relationships.
Chapter 483, ", Silver Tribunal", is the clearest early answer because it turns Gu Hang's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from He felt extremely frustrated, but what was even more suffocating was... to Apart from their inherently strong capabilities, they had developed.... What makes it stick is that it turns Gu Hang's growth into a concrete upgrade step and sets up the next payoff in the power growth storyline linked to Erso.
Chapter 114, "The Orchid Quest IV", is the clearest early answer because it turns Damien's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on Damien sat cross-legged on the ground, the dense silence of the... and ending on Aquila struck fiercely, its talons slashing through the air and its.... In story terms, the chapter closes with Also, thank you all for the 200+ power stones. Two more bonus chapters! Let's work harder!
Chapter 503, ", Zhuge-class Star Mothership", is the clearest early answer because it turns Gu Hang's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with In the midst of space warfare, the most critical capability of an... and closes on Not to mention how much money the planetary climate modification....
Chapter 459, ", Cruiser Technology!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Gu Hang's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on Others may wait, but for Gu Hang, waiting for Osenia was not an... and ending on This talent should be present in every Interstellar Warrior..
Chapter 104, "I Don't Plan On Failing II", is the clearest early answer because it turns Damien's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with The demons launched themselves at Damien with a guttural roar, their... and closes on Though it had killed four demons during its rampage, Aquila showed no.... The key payoff is that the chapter closes with The night was far from over, but Damien felt a renewed sense of determination.
Chapter 497, ", In the Name of the Battle Group", is the clearest early answer because the buildup finally cashes out in a real clash. The setup is Lost four matches, and in an utterly humiliating manner., but the pressure keeps building through The first match involved using Terminators against standard Powered....
Chapter 86, "Unbridled Fury II", is the clearest early answer because it turns Paul Haylen's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from The assassin, desperate to avoid further punishment, quickly gave up... to Are you… going to kill him?" he asked quietly.. What makes it stick is that the chapter closes with "Authority?" Terrace's laugh was devoid of humor. "You sent assassins after my son and me.
Chapter 471, ", Victory Strategy", is the clearest early answer because it turns Green Skins's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with Green Skin Orcs, of course, had no need to rule over humans. and closes on Gu Hang, of course, still had to guard against the main Green Skin.... The key payoff is that the danger stops being abstract and the conflict around Green Skins becomes immediate, forcing the surrounding cast to react under pressure.
Chapter 458, ", you dare too?", is the clearest early answer because it turns Alliance's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with Could living on 600 Tax Currency a year starve him to death? and closes on In the past, already a Planetary Governor, would he really have been.... The key payoff is that the chapter closes with Still owe 59k, which gives faction conflict a stronger narrative position and pushes the power growth onward.
Chapter 275, "Damon vs. Celeste", is the clearest early answer because it turns Damon's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is The match was about to begin when Miss Leana walked in., but the pressure keeps building through Thank the Gods I returned in time to watch this.. Once the chapter lands on Of course." Miss Leana smiled slightly., the chapter closes with What the hell just happened?, which gives the main cast a stronger narrative position and pushes the power growth onward.