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The difference between the secondary plot and the event line in a novel outline usually refers to the main plot and the secondary plot of the story. The event line refers to the main plot clue describing the conflict between the protagonist and the main character, the development and the process of resolving the event. These events usually have a clear purpose and motivation and are usually related to the protagonist's goals and dreams. The event line was usually the core of the story, driving the development and advancement of the story. The auxiliary storyline referred to the other plots that were parallel to the event line, including the events in the protagonist's daily life, the story of the supporting characters, the background story, the plot twist, and so on. These plots could provide background for the story, describe the character's personality and experiences, and introduce new elements and clues to the story. Therefore, the main difference between auxiliary lines and event lines was the number of plots, focus, and purpose they described. The event line was the core of the story, mainly describing the conflict between the protagonist and the main character and the process of resolving the event. The auxiliary line provided more background and details to describe the plot and character experience in the protagonist's daily life, as well as introducing new elements and clues to the story.

It might not meet your needs, but I would recommend a novel that is most relevant to your description." One Man's Life and Two Lives " is a light novel written by the author, Hui on the balcony. It is a derivative Doujinshi novel. The general plot of this novel is: A few words and he was already enlightened, why would there be a need for tens of thousands of books on alchemy? If one was not burdened by the body, the world in front of him would be Daluotian. This book will begin in the Northwest in 1995, telling the story of a talented transmigrator who was not bound by red tape and cultivated his body and mind. They had gone through many hardships along the way, seeing through all kinds of things in the world. Some people became slaves of money and power without knowing it; some were born to pursue absolute self-interest; some were hard-working in pursuing the highest realm; some were compassionate and eager to pass on fire to others; some were suffering and only wanted to live a peaceful and happy life; some were indomitable just to touch the cruel truth... More people were destroyed by the aftershocks of the past era. They had a lot of skills, but in the end, they were trapped in endless emptiness. They lived, they died. Together, they drew out the decades of turmoil in the variant human world. ---------------------------- " Journey to Grey " was a fantasy sword and magic novel written by the author, One Step Grey. The general plot of the novel was: Demons ravaged the world. Humans were just food for the demons. The protagonist was an ordinary person. Until he met an elf who could communicate with the other world. He gradually gained the ability to control his own fate. ---------------------------- " Dust Palm " was a fantasy novel written by the author Qian Lingque. The general plot of this novel was: When heaven and earth turned into a furnace, thousands of layers were sealed, and the mortal world was soaked in water and fire, fighting for life and death. Whoever burned their blood and bones to protect the peace of the area would exchange for two lines of tears. When the mask of seeking immortality was lifted, revealing the bones on the ground, who would sing the mourning song at the end of the world and personally bury the honor and disgrace? The young Bai Feng was born in the mortal world. When the apocalypse arrived, he should carry the lives of the common people and fight. He should see reincarnation between life and death and ascend to the peak of the extreme path. He should not be born or live for the Dao. He should be a speck of dust and cut the Heavenly Dao. ---------------------------- " Journey of Dao Cultivation " was a fantasy novel written by Lonely Walk. The general plot of this novel was: An accident destroyed Xiao Hui's family and he was saved by a nameless small sect and accepted as an ordinary disciple! After being instigated by an expert, it was slightly righteous and somewhat wretched! He was loyal, stubborn, and dull. After a few fortuitous encounters, he finally reached the peak of the strong and started a new journey of Dao Cultivation. ---------------------------- " Shelter of Time " was a short story written by the author, Yan Tu. The general plot of this novel was: In fact, there was often the purest darkness in one's heart, because sunlight could not touch it. In everyone's past, there was a hidden period of time that they did not want to be exposed. ---------------------------- The book " Human Bones " was a suspense-mystery detective novel written by Scholar Six Notes. The general plot of the novel was: In the vast sea and earth, in the human world, under the three feet of yellow soil, there were buried one after another unknown Miao Li Qu He. ---------------------------- Dust Furnace was a Xianxia novel written by the author, A and B Bing. The general plot of this novel was: The mortal world was like a furnace, and life was as cheap as grass. In this chaotic mortal world, only by picking up the steel knife in his hand and stopping the killing with killing could he survive tenaciously…Dust Furnace's only QQ group: 691601884. ---------------------------- The 10,001 Ways of Living the Protagonist was a fantasy-mystery fantasy novel written by the author, Bai Mo Zhan Hei Tian. The general plot of this novel was: " The world was just a sandbox that God casually created. Life was nothing but a puppet being manipulated on the sand table. This was an era where the high and mighty controlled mortals wantonly, making them kill in the midst of evil and conflict. This was an era where routines prevailed. No one could break free from the shackles of God and live their own destiny. He was a young fighter who had mastered the divine fire of heaven and earth and vowed to break through the sky, a man of the Tang family who had ventured into the martial world for a lifetime and became a soul master for a lifetime, and a mage who had created thunderstorms for thirty years and tornadoes for thirty years. Carrying thousands of protagonist souls from different worlds in his body, Nameless set foot on the first stop of finding the meaning of life in the world of magic fantasy, until the creator known as God destroyed everything. Nameless smiled bitterly. Bearing the name of the protagonist, he resolutely embarked on the path of fighting against God. The original name was 10,001 Ways to Die for the Protagonist. In the early stage, it was a psychopath's journey of western fantasy with love and despair as the main theme, and in the middle and late stage, it was the path of killing gods with fate as the theme. "。 ---------------------------- " Immortal Ascension " was a fantasy immortal cultivation novel written by the author, Guyan Blackhand. The general plot of this novel was: The vast continent had existed for tens of millions of years, and there were countless heroes and saints who could destroy the heavens and the earth. However, they still could not escape the erosion of time. Their time was coming and they had passed away. However, even though they were dead, their will remained. Their strong faith made their will turn into pieces of holy clothes that floated in every corner of the vast continent, shining like treasures. Black-bellied Liu Xiaodian would ascend to immortality on this mainland with the ancestral brush in his hand. PS: Group ID 188969757. ---------------------------- The Lost Baize was a suspense-mystery detective novel written by the author, Feng Xue Lighter. The general plot of the novel was: In the era of the Classic of Mountains and Seas, the ancient divine beast Bai Ze suddenly disappeared from the Three Realms. In the modern world, the chaotic life of young Zhuo Zhan was also broken. What was the connection between the two that transcended time and space? The sudden appearance of the black collar, the mysterious basement, the old butler who spoke with flickering words, the erased name of Bai Ze in the notebook…All the strangeness pointed to the disaster four years ago…The disappeared Bai Ze reading group: 542107092 Welcome to chat and complain.

The information about the ancient Changbai Mountain was as follows: Changbai Mountain was a famous mountain in Northeast China in ancient times. It was called "White Mountain" because of the snow on its peak. It was also called "Pine Mountain" because there were many pine trees on the mountain. In ancient times, the Changbai Mountains was a very important border area and was considered a safety barrier for Northeast China. According to historical records, Changbai Mountain had experienced many wars and changes in ancient times. Humans had lived here since the late Neoliths. During the Sui Dynasty, the Changbai Mountain area was once set up as Andong County, which was an important county. During the Tang Dynasty, Baizhou was established here and became an important state capital. During the Song Dynasty, the Changbai Mountain area became the border area between the Liao Kingdom and the Song Dynasty. There were many wars. During the Yuan Dynasty, the Changbai Mountain area became the location of the Yuan Dynasty's province, with Fusong County. During the Ming Dynasty, the Changbai Mountain area became an important border area again, and the Changbai Mountain Garrison Camp was set up. During the Qing Dynasty, the Changbai Mountain area became the Manchurian border area of the Qing Dynasty. There were Shengjing General's Yamen and Changbai Mountain's administrative agencies. In wuxia novels, Changbai Mountain was a very famous mountain. Many wuxia characters had left legends and stories here. For example, in Jin Yong's novel, Legend of the Condor Heroes, Guo Jing and Huang Rong were martial arts masters from Changbai Mountain, as well as famous martial arts figures such as Ximen Chuixue and Ye Erniang. If he wanted to include the Changbai Mountains in his novel, he could make appropriate descriptions and portrayals here to add some mystery and legend to the novel.

" A Confused Woman and a Married Man " is an ancient romance novel written by the author, Gongzi Shu. The general plot of this novel is: She was born in a noble family, but she had no children. In order to maintain the status of the Nangong family, she was raised as a man since she was young. She longed to wear women's clothes, and even more so, she longed to recover her female identity until she met " her." Their fates were intertwined because of an imperial edict. She became a husband, and he became a wife. The arrival of the war disrupted all peace. She was forced to go to the battlefield, and he chose to follow her. A series of events happened, revealing his true identity. How should she choose now? ---------------------------- " The King's Runaway Wife: The Golden Breakup Master " was a modern romance novel written by Cang Xiaojiu. The general plot of this novel was: [1v1 + Strong Man Strong Woman Strong] The man was furious! This woman had left him again and again. She even hooked up with a bunch of random men. He felt that she should be punished. When they met again, the woman blinked her beautiful eyes and said pitifully," Boss, I know I was wrong. Let's talk things out." The man ignored her acting cute and the corners of his mouth curled up." Didn't you say that if you can use your hands, try not to use your mouth?" The woman was speechless. ---------------------------- Abandoned Daughter Reversal: The General's Wife Comes from the Apocalypse was an ancient romance novel written by the author, Cha Lan. The general plot of this novel was as follows: Jiang Mohan, a water-type superpower user in the apocalypse, was reborn as an abandoned daughter. She was framed and was about to be kicked out of the house. Jiang Mohan, who had changed her tongue, expressed that this was not a problem. Selfish phoenix male father? Tear! Fake love, black-hearted stepmother Lian? Tear! A bossy and brainless stepsister? Tear! A hypocrite stepbrother? Tear! After taking revenge, Jiang Mohan felt refreshed. However, in the face of a certain general who always came over…Jiang Mohan: What's so good about being husband and wife? Isn't it good to be brothers who fight side by side? Yu Heng: " Not good. I just want to be with you for a hundred years." The plot is fictional, please do not imitate it. ---------------------------- " Wifey Don't Run " was an ancient romance novel written by the author, Qian Xijun. The general plot of this novel was: The dignified Second Miss of the Yan family had actually become the daughter of a general. He was aware of his feelings for her, but he found out that she had an engagement with the Xiang Ri clan leader. It was not easy to wait for love to blossom, but he unexpectedly disappeared. With the child in her stomach, she had no choice but to enter the palace to stabilize her pregnancy, but it attracted a lot of jealousy. Having regained his memories, he tried his best to keep up with her pace, just waiting for the day of their reunion. Wife, don't run, I'm back… ---------------------------- " Why Should I Love You?" was a modern romance novel written by the author, Jin Ranxi. The general plot of this novel was: She loved him deeply and had given him so much for so many years, only to find out that he was hiding another woman. When she wanted to give up on him, a certain man suddenly said that he had always loved her? He had turned a blind eye to her in the past, but now he wanted to win her back? I'm sorry, she's gone, and so is her heart. The plot is fictional, please do not imitate it. ---------------------------- " Official Husband and Thieving Wife " was an ancient romance novel written by the author, Peng Yu. The general plot of this novel was: During the day, she was a virtuous lady in a boudoir, but at night, she became a thief who robbed the rich and helped the poor. He was the guardian of the area. For the sake of the stability of the area, he had to catch this thief who disturbed the peace. In a strange combination of factors, she was about to marry him…In order to break off the engagement, she disguised herself as a man and approached him to investigate. However, she did not expect to become his partner and work together to solve a shocking case. One was an official, the other was a thief. In the end, they were strangers on different roads, or lovers finally got together? The plot is fictional, please do not imitate it. ---------------------------- " Super Soldier King of the City " was a novel about urban supernatural powers written by the author Yu Gu. The general plot of the novel was: In the process of carrying out the mission, he learned a shocking secret. In order to prevent the secret from being leaked, all the team members were shot dead. One of the team members escaped with his superb medical skills and hid his identity. He only wanted to find his ex-girlfriend and live happily. However, he did not expect that his ex-girlfriend had plotted against him… ---------------------------- The book," Beauty: Please Forget Me, Overseer " was a modern romance novel written by Su Xiaomian 01. The general plot of the novel was: He was the young master of a warlord, forbearing and black-bellied. She was a woman of the Spirit Realm. Every hundred years, she needed a pure and true soul to extend her life. She took his lover's soul and promised to protect him for the rest of his life. In the chaotic times, power struggles, brothers killing each other, and conspiracies… She loved him so much that even though she knew that he was like a moth flying into the fire, she had no regrets. He loved her, so much so that he was scheming and suspicious… Forget about me and live well. If I can come back, you have already forgotten me. If a girl loves you very much, it must be me. ---------------------------- " Supporting Male, Your Supporting Female Died Again " was an ancient romance novel written by the author Chu Xizhao. The general plot of this novel was: Lin Xingyu transmigrated into the book with her mission and became a passerby in the small plots. She had helped the young master of the Zhangs to take over the family business. Helping the imperial envoy investigate corruption, she had completed it. She had succeeded in overturning the verdict of the general's family who had been wrongly imprisoned. ...........。 However, she really couldn't bring a group of unreliable bandits to fight for the male protagonist's territory! ---------------------------- " The Cannon Fodder is Always on the Run " was a modern romance novel written by the author who was very busy. The general plot of this novel was: It was said that wealthy families had deep entanglements, the female lead was kind and had many hardships, the male lead had high means, and the second male lead was black-bellied and affectionate. She was just trying to show that the second male lead was black-bellied and short-lived! [System: Host's mission: Help the male and female lead to be together.] Yuan Su thought,'I can't be short-lived cannon fodder!' [System: Slower, execute punishment!] Yuan Su gritted his teeth." Tong, help me up. I think I can still be saved!"

Other than "The Aftermath of the Stellar Transformations", another novel also called "The Stellar Transformations" was "The Devouring Stellar Transformations", a derivative doujinshi novel written by the author Luo Ku. It mainly told the story of the protagonist cultivating his body while devouring the starry sky, and then becoming an invincible existence in the world of stars. I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~😗

The name of the female protagonist in the novel, Si Yan, came from the name of the female protagonist in the novel," The daughter of the prime minister was bullied and hugged the Regent's thigh, refusing to let go."

I don't think it'll necessarily meet your needs, but I'll try my best to recommend a novel that's most relevant to your description."Superstar of the Korean Entertainment Era" is a novel about urban and entertainment stars written by the author, a painful madman. The general plot of this novel is: A boy with a girl's face. He had accepted all the memories of someone from another time and space. He had met the woman of his destiny here. Who will win in the entanglement of kinship and love? Let's find it in this book. ---------------------------- "EXO's Pursuit of the Evilest Man" was a light novel by Han Ningxi, a doujinshi derivative novel. The general plot of the novel was: //Abandon the pit, little cuties, I'm sorry//The so-called ultimate skill of a bad friend is to pester him, cry, make a fuss, and hang himself. It's a trap for a certain Ran girl to disguise herself as a man and enter the Asian Heavenly Group! "Wife!" I heard you like cake!" "Yes." "So try the super delicious mousse cake that your husband personally made!" "Please send an ambulance over later." "Wife! I want to sing a song for you!" "Is it a song from the new album? Hurry up and sing!" "Then I'll sing! Under the bridge in front of the door..." I want to reserve a bed with you. "Unknowingly, you have entered my heart. This is a huge pit. Children who can't imagine things themselves should be careful to enter! ---------------------------- "99-Day Contract Pet: Young Master Han, Please Let Go" was a modern romance novel written by the author, Little Zhuang. The general plot of this novel was: Four years ago, Tong Yingqiao, who was still an ugly duckling, had done the most OPEN thing in her life, asking Han Jingting for a mistress! However, she accidentally caused her sugar daddy to almost fall into a sh * t pit and leave with a little bean sprout. Four years later, the little bean sprout did the same thing as his mommy, asking for a sugar daddy! "Tong Yingqiao, you didn't kill me back then. Now that you're back, are you trying to push me into the sh * t pit again?!" The result of anger was irrationality. Little Bean and Mommy were kept as a mistress, and they even got an officially certified little red book! Mr. Han: "You're not going to use a knife this time, are you going to use a stool to kill me?" Mrs. Han: I thought it was a thief! Mr. Han: "Who stole my seed back then and dared to run away with it?!" Mrs. Han immediately pushed out the little bean sprout and said,"I-I'll return it to its rightful owner and atone for my sins!" ---------------------------- "Parent-child variety show, the little one becomes famous in the entertainment circle by acting cute" was a modern romance novel written by the author, Alivo. The general plot of this novel was: [Cute Baby + Metaphysical + Group Pet + Entertainment Circle] had used a gunny sack to get himself a movie king daddy at the beginning of the game, and had suddenly become the group pet of the richest family. The CEO's second uncle waved his hand domineeringly,"Take the black card away!" Third Uncle Hacker: "Baby, you're more important than the computer." Uncle Lawyer and God of War: "Who doesn't have eyes to bully Zhao Zhao? Recite the protection law once, don't you?" Wait for me to sharpen the knife. ---------------------------- "Yixing Yiyi, Let's Fall in Love" was a light novel written by the author, Su Ximo. The general plot of this novel was: Three years ago, I accidentally met him, the leader of the Blood Clan's healing system, Zhang Yixing. We got to know each other and fell in love, but I lost him during a trespassing incident. Today, three years later, I accidentally saw a poster of an Asian idol exo on the street. In the poster, he still hadn't changed from three years ago, but he was more handsome and sunny. I tried all kinds of ways to get close to him, but when I stood in front of him, he said he didn't know me. I admit that I haven't had a good time in the past three years. There were many times when I really couldn't hold on any longer and was on the verge of breaking down. But when I think of you who I haven't found yet, I hold on. I don't know where there's so much pressure. I've changed and lost too much. There were many things that I really couldn't accept, but I couldn't resist either. I could only get up after crying and continue walking. Because I have no choice but to be strong. ---------------------------- EXO, So We've Been Together Before was a light novel by author Gong Xiaole, a doujinshi derivative novel. The general plot of this novel was: Infinite good books are all in reading articles. ---------------------------- 'Group Pet Boss Is Three Years Old' was a modern romance novel written by the author Junjun. The general plot of the novel was as follows: It was rumored that the heartless, cold, and paranoid big shot had run away with his wife and even abandoned his child. From then on, Joshua became even more ruthless and cold than before. One day, a little fellow suddenly appeared and broke the silence. "Papa, please don't send Qingqing away…" Master Qiao's eldest son said."I don't want a half-sister!" "Hurry up and leave. Don't disturb my studies!" said Master Qiao's second son. "I'll give you candy," said Master Qiao's youngest son."Be good and leave. We don't have the same mother." Then one day…the eldest son said,"Actually, this little one is not bad either." "But it's not our mommy's child." The youngest son kept crying."Mommy, I'm sorry. I fell in love with Daddy's baby with another woman…" Later on, the three sons found out that the three-year-old was actually their mother! ---------------------------- "Explode!" Group Pet Little Milk Bun Is So Cute "was a modern romance novel written by Orange of Yushu. The general plot of the novel was: One day, the Ginger Candies saw a man who looked very similar to her on TV. She had a hunch that this was her father. Therefore, she secretly ran out to look for her father without telling her mother. Who would have thought that after finding her father, she would be doted on to the heavens! "My baby, with Daddy here, no one will bully you!" Grandpa: Good granddaughter, come to Grandpa. Grandpa has good things! Grandma: Tangtang, come to Grandma. Grandma has something good for you too! Her uncles 'brothers also doted on her a lot. Big Brother: This is my sister. Isn't she cute? Second Brother: My sister is prettier than your sister, right? Third Brother: My sister is the most beautiful sister in the world! As a result, the Ginger Candies received a lot of love from her family. She was no longer a wild child who had no parents. ---------------------------- "Korean Entertainment's Strongest Idol" was a novel written by the author, Fei Yan in his sleep. The general plot of the novel was: His composition made Kara popular in Korea and made Girls 'Generation return from the Black Sea! Let Tara reach the peak! r He and Zheng Xiujing starred in "We're Married" and became a national couple. He and Park Jiyeon went to "Law of the Jungle" and became national siblings! r New book, please collect, please recommend! This is already my second Korean Entertainment novel. I promise it won't be a mess! r The new book had been released. The new book was titled "Korean Entertainment Scumbag"! Book number 3679297, please support me! r。 ---------------------------- "Little Cutie Is Spoiled by Her Older Brothers and Becomes a Big Boss" was a modern romance novel written by the author, Wu Yun Cheng Feng. The general plot of this novel was: "What is it? Dad doesn't want her to disturb their alone time, so he wants us to take care of her?" This was f * cking cheating his son! The big shots of the Smiths were extremely resistant to this milk dumpling that they had never met before! Best Actor Number One: I'm filming, I'm busy! Number Two's wealthiest brother,"Here's a check for you. Go play by yourself!" Brother Chef God Number Three thought,"Can I eat a sister or something?" Miracle Doctor Number Four thought,"Hmm, a four-and-a-half-year-old little fellow. He should be good as an experimental white mouse." … However, after the nine big shots of the Su family spent a few days with the milk dumpling... "Sister smells so good!" "Calling me younger sister is above the heavens!" "Whoever dares to bully my sister, I'll teach them a lesson!" Looking at the few aggressive sister-doting demons, a little puppy hid in a corner and trembled. [Protect the world's best cute master!]

The Best of Us was a very popular youth drama. There were many classic lines in the drama that left a deep impression on people. Here are some classic lines: Can we still be friends? - Yu Huai said to Geng Geng Youth is used to reminisce. When you look back, you will find that there are many things you haven't gotten, but you won't pursue them anymore. - The lyrics of the theme song of the youth drama "The Best of Us" I believe that our future will be very good. - I said to Yu Huai Actually, I've always liked someone, but I didn't have the courage to confess. - Luo Zhi said to Sheng Huainan, If you go forward, I will always follow you, but if you turn back, I will always go forward. - I said to Yu Huai Youth doesn't leave regrets, doesn't leave empty spaces, we just want to be together. - Yu Huai said to Geng Geng Can we meet again after graduation? - Luo Zhi asked Sheng Huainan Can we still be friends after our youth ends? - Indulgently ask Yu Huai We seem to have met somewhere before. - Yu Huai said to Luo Zhi, We are the best because of our loyalty. - The title of the play is "The Best of Us."

I recommend the following novels to you: 1. Dragon Wars-The powerful protagonist fights against the demonic dragon in a world of swords and magic. 2. "The Way of the Evil Woman"-A female loser who transmigrated into the sister of the protagonist of a cultivation trash novel and eventually became a generation of evil women; 3. "The City's Top Mercenaries"-The protagonist who travels through various worlds and receives commissions for completing missions, a military novel; 4. "Snatched the number one spot on the list of rich second-generation heirs, the identity of the delivery man was exposed."-An urban supernatural novel. The main character was a delivery man who had a girlfriend but only one. His identity was exposed because of an accident. I hope you like my recommendation. Muah ~

😋I recommend the online game Mountain Thieves Are Crazy to you. The protagonist woke up one day and found himself an NPC in the game. He was forcefully named "Mountain Thief A" by the system and had lost his memory. In order to regain his memory, he had to work hard to become the strongest person in the game. He had once sat on a hill and let the monsters kill each other, and his level had risen very quickly! I hope I can help you. Muah ~😗