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Chapter 396, "The Visit from the Mechanical God Cult", is the clearest early answer because it turns Gu Hang's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, Jindi Star belongs to the Mingyang Sect the Sect of Mechanics.. By the end, Taking over the Flying Wing Star Shipyard was a big deal for the....

Chapter 108, "A Warning Letter And A Request Letter", is the clearest early answer because a shaky connection becomes usable in the plot. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Shoooooong~ The golden glow of the teleportation array faded, and the... and follows through with Thank you all for reading regardless!.

Chapter 394, ", The Choice of Flying Wing Star", is the clearest early answer because it turns Hongjian Star's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Although seemingly similar, after joining the Alliance, Hongjian Star... to Now, instead of the invisible hand of market competition, it was the....

Chapter 504, ", How strong will the Alliance Fleet be after 4 years?", is the clearest early answer because a shaky connection becomes usable in the plot. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from The Empire doesn't favor aircraft carriers, but Gu Hang has no... to As long as the patrol ship manages to fire off all the firepower it....

Chapter 478, ", The Long-Awaited Technology Lottery", is the clearest early answer because it turns Gu Hang's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with Gu Hang had about fifteen hundred thousand Grace Points remaining for... and closes on If all else fails, they could also be used for foreign trade..

Chapter 19, "Calm And Calamity", is the clearest early answer because it turns Garius's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with The Forest of Twin Disasters was calm with the occasional rustling of... and follows through with I will return to regular updates from today..

Chapter 458, ", How Dare You?", is the clearest early answer because it turns Alliance's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, Lalin Ulrich's expression was quite grim.. By the end, Moreover, a per capita output of 1 tax currency, many planets.... Inside the broader faction conflict storyline, the chapter closes with But at least, the system tried to guarantee fairness as much as possible. Six years of primary education were mandatory and free;

Chapter 3, "Opposing Awakened Talents", is the clearest early answer because it turns Gods's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is The Terrace family was one of the greatest families of the Eastern..., but the pressure keeps building through The family was blessed with individuals with varying talents and had.... Once the chapter lands on He was simply curious as to what the figure in front of them was..., the chapter closes with "Opposite talents, huh?

Chapter 138, "Trading Essence Cores", is the clearest early answer because it turns Damien's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with Damien stood at the edge of the cobblestone path, staring at the... and closes on Thank you." She tilted her head, clearly puzzled.. The key payoff is that the chapter closes with She motioned for him to follow, and as they walked, Damien felt a strange sense of calm.

Chapter 497, ", In the Name of the Battle Group", is the clearest early answer because the buildup finally cashes out in a real clash. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Lost four matches, and in an utterly humiliating manner. to With gritted teeth, he would continue to fight this battle.. What makes it stick is that the danger stops being abstract and the conflict around Battle Group becomes immediate, forcing the surrounding cast to react under pressure.