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Chapter 116, "Great Righteousness, Hunting Flood Dragons, Saliva [Five-in-One Mega Chapter]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Teng Jiao's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Their preparation was exceedingly thorough; they followed Xia Hong's... and follows through with Having exhausted their arrows, Zhao Long and his brothers also drew....

Chapter 101, "The Excitement of New Clothes", is the clearest early answer because it turns Mu Dong's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with It's not that Xia Hong is particularly handsome. and closes on Besides, clothing is not a particularly scarce resource.. The key payoff is that the chapter closes with Shi Qing's son, Shi Ping., which gives Mu Dong a stronger narrative position and pushes the power growth onward.

Chapter 131, "The Entire Hunting Team Breaks Through", is the clearest early answer because it turns Deceitful Monster's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on The panic brought by the Deceitful Monster visibly spread throughout... and ending on The door opened, and Xia Chuan entered with a smile on his face,....

Chapter 116, "Great Justice, Hunting Jiao, Saliva [Five-in-One Mega Chapter]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Yuan Cheng's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, The Long-tailed Rodent, with its tail removed, is no more than a.... By the end, When wielding a regular large saber, the strong edge slicing through.... Inside the broader family politics storyline, the chapter closes with The Collection Team and the Logging Team had already headed out earlier;

Chapter 103, "The 2nd Earth-digging Realm", is the clearest early answer because Xia Hong finally turns buildup into a real advancement. The setup is In the valley mine, an iron ore the size of a palm was chiseled from..., but the pressure keeps building through Sweating profusely, Xia Hong first put down the sheep horn chisel in....

Chapter 168, "Snow Bamboo, Longyou, Sudden Wealth - Part 3", is the clearest early answer because it turns Longyou Alliance's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on Xia Hong encompassed the entire Arrow Bamboo Forest on the scroll,... and ending on So far, Great Xia has ventured only about three to four kilometers.... In story terms, the chapter closes with Xia Hong paid it no mind at all;

Chapter 112, "Is It Real or Fake?", is the clearest early answer because it turns Xia Hong's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with With previous battle experience, leading the encirclement this time,... and closes on Xia Chuan and Luo Yuan followed closely behind..

Chapter 108, "Long-tailed Rodent [3-in-1 Mega Chapter]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Frost Wolves's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with The power of the swarming Cold Beasts was already something Xia Hong... and closes on Without understanding why they're congregated here, trying to lead....

Chapter 115, "New Earth-digging Realm, Enhancing Mining Efficiency [Three in One]", is the clearest early answer because Xia Chuan finally turns buildup into a real advancement. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from On the third day of moving into the new residence, on the second... to What's your estimate, how many people can this wooden house.... What makes it stick is that the chapter closes with It's not that they are vain;

Chapter 122, "Finally Started to Withdraw【Three in One】", is the clearest early answer because it turns Xia Hong's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on The broadsword can be used, but against a swarm of rodents, its... and ending on The lead two rodents were nailed by the Iron Arrows, the poison sacs....