You can describe the characters' thoughts and feelings during the break to make it more vivid. Maybe they're reflecting on what happened before or looking forward to what's next.
One way to do it is to focus on the setting of the break. Describe the environment, the weather, or any small details that add to the atmosphere. Also, show how the characters interact with the setting. Another approach is to use internal monologue to reveal the characters' uncertainties or decisions during this time.
To depict breaks well in novels, you could slow down the pace a bit. Give the readers a chance to soak in the moment. Also, introduce some unexpected elements or events during the break to keep them engaged. And don't forget to tie the break to the overall plot development; make it meaningful and not just a filler.
Chapter 110, "Must Take Action Immediately", is the clearest early answer because it turns Teng Jiao's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Run!" In such a predicament, there was no other choice left. and follows through with A bunch appeared on the northern slope..." Xia Hong didn't hide....
Chapter 114, "New House, New Rules, New Beginning [Four-in-One Mega Chapter]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Contribution Value's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with Hong Mu once again asked the question he was most concerned about,... and closes on What they didn't expect was the allocation based on family units..
Chapter 1, ", The World in the Grip of Winter [Please Add to Favorites!]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Cold Beast's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is The cold wind raged, and snow filled the sky., but the pressure keeps building through Under the cover of night, the towering trees clad in white snow stood....
Chapter 8, "Breaking Through the Logging Realm", is the clearest early answer because Xia Ding finally turns buildup into a real advancement. It opens with By the campfire, everyone at the Great Xia Camp was either lying down... and closes on There were twelve stakes in total, five of one hundred pounds, two of....
Chapter 91, "[Looking for First Subscription] Chapter 91: The Selection Begins", is the clearest early answer because it turns Snow Mane's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on It's important to know that Snow Mane is currently one of the weaker... and ending on But at the very least, your survival skills must be strong..
Chapter 54, "Revised: Chapter 54 Bodies Everywhere [Please Follow!]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Xia Hong's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is Luo Ming's willingness to follow Xia Hong back could be considered..., but the pressure keeps building through What Xia Hong needed was actually just this bit of trust..
Chapter 57, "Solidified Fire Oil is Used Up", is the clearest early answer because it turns Luo Ming's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is When the solidified fire oil was taken out of the iron refining..., but the pressure keeps building through Although it appeared solid, a gentle force could liquify it..
Chapter 463, "The Start Of A Farewell", is the clearest early answer because it turns Damien's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with The calm stretched thin, almost unnaturally so. and follows through with The stillness before the next storm..
Chapter 118, "Poison Sac, Bow Making [2 in 1]", is the clearest early answer because it turns Bow Making's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, Seeing the bows and arrows for the first time, the five of them were.... By the end, The three brothers had a high proficiency in archery and a deep....
Chapter 527, "But I'm Not Complaining", is the clearest early answer because it turns Damien's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, The scouts arrived hours after the battle.. By the end, Bird-like mana creatures skimmed across the surface before darting.... Inside the broader faction conflict storyline, the chapter closes with Especially when dealing with enemies that preferred the sky., which gives exploration a stronger narrative position and pushes the power growth onward.