A novel required a good foundation in writing. Writing skills included language skills, fluency, vocabulary, grammar, and so on. A good novel needed to let the readers feel the emotions and thoughts of the novel.
Chapter 164, "The World in the Mirror, Immortal", is the clearest early answer because it turns Beast Blood's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with That Xia Hong's strength is actually so formidable, it's actually so... and follows through with He Meng, He Gang, and two hundred seventy-one Earth-digging Realm....
Chapter 213, "News from Long Mountain, Ecstasy, and Riot", is the clearest early answer because it turns Pingxi Plain's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from The Beehive's base is underground and relies on lamp lighting at all... to Didn't you want to see the knives?. What makes it stick is that the chapter exposes hidden motives around Pingxi Plain, so readers can finally see how the conspiracy layer of the plot is actually moving.
Chapter 124, "The Arrogant Mirror Immortal Camp", is the clearest early answer because it turns Xia Hong's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Fifteen people walked out of the bamboo forest. and follows through with The four of you, stay a bit farther from the group and keep.
Chapter 167, "Snatching the Mirror, He Yuanhun's Confidence", is the clearest early answer because it turns Xia Hong's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on How about you surrender now and come back with me to the Great Xia... and ending on The mirror, upon contact with his eye, automatically shrank and then....
Chapter 170, "Camp Integration, Territory Rapid Expansion (Part 2)", is the clearest early answer because it turns Cold Beast's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on As expected of a giant camp, the number of people in the Logging... and ending on The top leaders, He Yuanhun and Yuwen Hu, only needed to oversee the....
Chapter 134, "The Difficult Hunt [Warm Sun Titan adds more 3/10]", is the clearest early answer because the buildup finally cashes out in a real clash. The setup is When the torch ignited, the huge creature, a hundred meters away, did..., but the pressure keeps building through Though lured by the torch, it didn't approach right away after coming....
Chapter 175, "Ape Mountain, Xiao He Camp", is the clearest early answer because it turns Hunting Team's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, On the north shore of the Xing River, the air was filled with a large.... By the end, Fortunately, though immature, Xiao Hen has never caused any real....
Chapter 109, "The Consequences of Being Too Clever", is the clearest early answer because it turns Xia Hong's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from On the north side of Redwood Ridge, within the territory of the Lu... to Though the Teng Jiao's eyes were shut, its nostrils exhaled white....
Chapter 163, "Almost Annihilated, The Mystery of Gao Yu", is the clearest early answer because it turns Great Xia's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with After tonight, everything will be completely different. and closes on Not only that, Xia Hong also wiped the bloodstains off his left face..
Chapter 159, "Blood and Flesh Wall, Has the Leader Not Broken Through Yet?", is the clearest early answer because it turns Iron's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter gives readers a real answer by opening on A few low-level Cold Beasts don't pose much of a problem, with so... and ending on Some, sensing their own limits, imitated Mu Dong by tying the Iron....