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2026-01-03 19:02
I want to write a novel. The setting is the Qing Dynasty, and I didn't transmigrate. However, I really don't know where my writing skills are good or bad. I always feel that it's not very smooth when I write. I just attached a short paragraph below, hoping to evaluate my writing skills. Is there any aspect that can be improved? Be more objective ~ It's best if you can say that it's different from some of the publicly recognized strong novels like "Step by Step" and "Unique Step". It was really a sincere request for advice. If there were any problems, he could change them thoroughly. Good reviews will be added ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The prison cells of the Ministry of Personnel Affairs had always been a place where one could only enter but not leave. In the damp dungeon, there were two prison guards sitting together. The oil lamp was still emitting a weak light. This prison cell was particularly quiet at night. In addition, it was late winter, and the cold air came in waves. The younger one of the two kept breathing out white air and trembling as he wrapped his robe tightly. In this late night, his robe seemed particularly thin. The jailer cursed under his breath. He shrunk his neck and looked around before whispering to the other jailer,"Brother Zhang, tell me, the masters locked up in this prison are all rich and noble. If we curry favor with them, we might be able to get some benefits when they get out in the future." "Out?" The older one, who had been sitting there in a daze, couldn't help but snort when he heard his words. He took out his pipe from his waist, lit it, and took two deep puffs. "Ever since Emperor Taizong established our Qing Dynasty, which person who entered the prison of the Ministry of Personnel has ever left alive? What great master, it was the same here! From the previous dynasty's Amin Baylor to the current Lord Wansui's half-brother Prince Su, which one of them wasn't in the limelight outside before they came in? However, the reason they came in was the same. These people were superior people. They wore gold and silver. They were used to delicacies and were restless. In the end, they became prisoners. They could not escape the words "power struggle". They came in and wanted to leave? Humph, maybe in the next life." "Brother Zhang…" The young jailer pointed at a cell in the dark."Who is that man over there? I haven't seen him say a word in the days I've been here." The man who was called Brother Zhang raised his head and glanced at the cell. He retracted his neck and shook his head."I don't know. I only know that he's a leader of the White Flag." "A white flag?" The young jailer rolled his eyes and suddenly exclaimed,"But the regent's…" "Shh!" Halfway through his sentence, his mouth was covered by a hand. The jailer looked around guiltily and then said in a low voice,"There are some things that we, as servants, should never know. If we know, we will have to bring them into the mud." The young jailer could not help but tremble. It was about half past midnight, so the two of them perked up again. At this time, with the help of the dim yellow light, they saw a blurry shadow gradually appear at the corner of the prison door. The shadow shrank and shrank until someone finally stepped through the door. "Who is it?" The young jailer was shocked. He stood up and was about to touch his saber when he was pulled down by another jailer."Don't make a sound!" Brother Zhang placed his hand on his lips, signaling him to keep quiet. His eyes carefully drifted to the person who came in. The person was covered in a black cloak and had her head lowered. Her appearance could not be seen at all, but from her figure, she was probably a woman. "Brother, Brother Zhang…" The jailer was probably a little frightened, and his tone was a little unstable. The man walked past them and took the key from the table. Without saying a word, he walked into the depths of the dungeon. The old jailer heaved a sigh of relief. He turned around and said angrily,"Do you want to die? Who are you to deal with the dense guards outside?" After a moment, she reminded him worriedly,"You can't tell anyone about what happened tonight, remember?" "Yes…" The jailer was still in shock and hurriedly nodded. He was confused and did not know what was going on today. However, he roughly understood that no matter what it was, it was probably not something that could be sung on the stage.
2026-01-03 20:47

The writing was to let the readers understand the basic plot and the relationship between the characters. Here are some tips to help you get started: 1. Decide on the theme and basic plot of the story. Before you start writing, you need to be clear about the theme and basic plot of the story. This helps to build the framework of the story and determine the direction of the writing. 2. Create the main characters. A novel needed to have some main characters who all had their own characteristics and motives. You need to create an attractive image for these characters and determine their personality, appearance, and relationships. 3. Setting up the scene. A novel needs to have some scenes to show the plot. These scenes can be indoors or outdoors and can describe a specific place or situation. You need to set up the scene and determine its purpose and meaning. 4. Practice writing. Writing requires constant practice. Only constant practice can improve your writing skills. You can practice and try to constantly modify and improve your work by writing a diary, a poem, or a short story. I hope these suggestions will help me start writing. Good luck!

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