Twenty Thousand Miles Under the Sea

Good line: As the ship went deeper and deeper into the water the sound of the waves grew smaller and smaller until it became completely silence Appreciation: This sentence expressed a sense of loneliness and silence by describing the sound of the waves gradually becoming softer as the ship moved in the deep sea. At the same time, this sentence also emphasized the degree of loneliness and silence through words such as "getting bigger and bigger" and "complete silence" to let the readers feel the horror and mystery of the deep sea. The whole sentence structure was clear and the language was smooth. It used simple vocabulary and grammar to express deep emotions. It was an excellent scene description of 20,000 miles under the sea.