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TheMundaneGuy
TheMundaneGuyLv65yr
2018-12-04 04:31

This novel is so bad, though I don't know if it's the translation quality that makes it so or the original work itself was bad. Regardless, the story is all over the place and the flow is totally out of place. Regardless, I feel the story idea has potential. Just that I found ploughing through it very taxing. Don't recommend it to anyone. Try it at your own risk.

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radams
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Cawcaw
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Welp you were to late as I have already read it.

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StretchArmstrong
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"Hello, Elixir Supplier, I am going into battle and I want your strongest Elixirs." "My Elixirs are too strong for you, traveler." "Elixir Supplier, I tell you I am going into battle, and I want only your strongest Elixirs." "You can't handle my Elixirs. They're too strong for you." "Elixir Supplier, listen to me; I want only your strongest Elixirs." "My Elixirs would kill you, traveler. You cannot handle my Elixirs." "Elixir Supplier, enough of these games. I'm going into battle and I need your strongest Elixirs." "My strongest Elixirs would kill you, traveler. You can't handle my strongest Elixirs. You'd better go to a Supplier that sells weaker Elixirs." "Elixir Supplier, I'm telling you right now; I'm going into battle and I need only your strongest Elixirs." "You don't know what you ask, traveler. My strongest Elixirs will kill a dragon let alone a man. You need a Supplier that sells weaker Elixirs, because my Elixirs are too strong." "Elixir Supplier, I'm telling you I need your strongest Elixirs. I'm going into battle! I'm going to battle and I need your strongest Elixirs!" "You can't handle my strongest Elixirs! No one can! My strongest Elixirs are fit for a beast let alone a man." "Elixir Supplier, what do I have to tell you to get your Elixirs? Why won't you trust me with your strongest Elixirs, Elixir Supplier? I need them if I'm to be successful in the battle!" "I can't give you my strongest Elixirs because my strongest Elixirs are only for the strongest beings and you are of the weakest." "Well then that's it, Elixir Supplier. I'll go elsewhere. I'll go elsewhere for my Elixirs." "That's what you'd better do." "I'll go elsewhere for my Elixirs and I'll never come back!" "Good. You're not welcome here! My Elixirs are only for the strongest and you're clearly are not of the strongest you're clearly the weakest." "You've had your say, Elixir Supplier but I'll have mine. You're a rascal, you're a rascal with no respect for knights. No respect for anything...except your Elixirs!" "Why respect knights...when my Elixirs can do anything that you can..."

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