The translation is honestly horrible, if the author fixes it up the story would probably be really good. It is a headache just trying to read it.
Denzil_Beast
Liked it!
how?
The translation is bad you called misty Stephenie, there’s a city called girl city, there’s many mistakes in just one chapter. I recomend you use gramerly it should be able to help some. I’m not gonna do mental gymnastics to understand a fanfic