one of the best I've ever read for along while keep going author and pls more chapters per weak like 7(lol)

o MC tá parecendo cego em tiroteio, não sabe pra onde vai nem oque faz. mais fazer oque né ele não tem risco de vida nem um objeto pra seguir. tudo bem que só tá começando agora mas não vejo como isso pode funcionar no futuro

very good novel but please release more chapter quickly so it will be even more interesting .

I love the story so far. The writing quality is very good and there are no mistakes or anything. and the development is also great. It's something unique because in other ss fanfictions they never have cheats or are very strong. I would love to have more Updates but I can understand how hard it is to write a fanfiction and don't want to burden you. I just hope, and that is my biggest wish, that it doesn't suddenly get dropped. there were so many good fics I read but many randomly got dropped without any notice or reason. I'll probably leave another review when it has more chapters. Summary: Great fanfiction, more chapters, don't drop

Bien, está bueno para pasar el rato. El OC está muy roto, pero es divertido si no buscas un personaje profundo y tal. Hasta ahora me gusta la idea de su fachada de ser super poderoso que habita dentro de sunny y como lo perciben los demás al revelarse, pero aun creo que es demasiado poderoso con esa habilidad de creación jajaja

I understand it was meant to be a fun read i also know how hard is novel writing i also tried to write a novel it was hectic bcz i don't have laptop only mobile but can you plz at least post 7 chapter a week its good fanfic and honestly there are no Shadow slave novel with cheats there is only one shadow slave novel which has cheat but writer stopped that story i think it,s name was ( Mahoraga in shadow slave ) plz if it isn't that much of a problem for you write a chapter daily love this work