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EqualToHeaven
EqualToHeavenLv12mth
2024-09-12 00:49

Will update the review later when it has more chapters. So far, the start was captivating. And it's well-written. The mysterious vibe the author has been aiming for was rounded up well. Would recommend you to read, good luck to the author!

Veilbound Secrets: The Oath Bearer's Curse

TheEternalSky
5.0
33 Chs

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TheEternalSky
TheEternalSkyAuthor

As the author, I'm naturally inclined to give my own novel 5 stars, but I understand that only you, the readers, can truly decide if it lives up to that. I encourage you to dive into the story, form your own opinions, and share your thoughts. While the pace starts slow, it gradually picks up momentum after the first few chapters, so I hope you'll stick around to experience the unfolding journey. Your feedback is invaluable, and I'm always here to answer any questions you have. Happy reading, and I hope you enjoy the journey!

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Frugalwanderer
FrugalwandererLv1

I just caught up right now with the first 8 chpaters, and I must say that I'm rather impressed by it. It's quite slow at first, but i believe that is a necessary sacrifice. The author is trying to build a compelling world, and i must say that he's succeeding. It is not a masterpiece by no meams but it's great for what it is, especially for a first novel at that. I'm anticipant about this and the authors future works in general. I believe he or she has a lot of dormant potential that will fruit as he or she writes more and more novels and conversely chapters.

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JONTY_
JONTY_Lv14

I'm really enjoying this novel so far! It's got a fresh and unique feel compared to most web novels out there. The power system is new and pretty captivating, and the author does a great job building up a mysterious vibe. It's also really well-written, which adds to the overall experience. Since the story is just starting, I’m excited to see how the main character develops, especially since he's still figuring things out like anyone would when thrown into a new world. I can't wait to see how all the mysteries unfold, how the MC uncovers the truth behind the 'Veil,' and the reason he was thrust into this new world. That said, if you're not into mysterious plots or aren't patient enough to let things unfold, you might find it a bit slow. But honestly, it's still in its early phase, so I'd say give it a chance!

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Felix_F1
Felix_F1Lv1

Just caught up with the first seven chapters and I have to say, it’s quite a good start, at first, the pacing is a bit slow as the author mentioned too, as they are trying to lay out the world, there is also heavy info on the power system. But honestly, that slow burn really works here. It gives you time to soak in all the details and start piecing things together. The power system and the unique way of "borrowing" mana and the veil is a very interesting concept, personally I liked it alot. Aric Oswin, wakes up in this fantasy world in someone else's body, quite a generic start but hey the build-up was very good, you get the sense that things aren’t going to be easy for him. And the whole idea of being guided—or maybe manipulated—by the mysterious voice not knowing what will happen to him is quite good. Overall, the story sets up a lot of tension and mystery, and I'm excited to see where it goes. I'm hooked and curious to see how the story progresses. I will be giving it 5 stars for now to support, but this may change depending on the progression of the story.

2mth
TheBlackestRaven
TheBlackestRavenLv2

As far as I've read (7 chapters), the novel is incredibly grippy and captivating. I am extremely expectant about this novel due to this. So yeah, if anyone is reading this, do give it a try.

2mth
Straw_6025
Straw_6025Lv1

The plot and ideas initially feel familiar, but they each have a clever twist that makes them stand out in a fresh and exciting way. I genuinely enjoyed the story and am eager to see how the author continues to develop these unique elements. Looking forward to more! Best of luck!

2mth
Ferzen
FerzenLv1

Pretty good with the plot and other ideas which at first seem generic but have a unique twist? to them, genuinely enojoyed it and i am looking forward to seeing more from the author. Good luck.

2mth
JosephJoester
JosephJoesterLv2

Can't say much, only 7 chapters out so far. But from the little available, I can say it's a very good start. Goodluck to the author, looking forward to more

2mth
Daoist_God_King
Daoist_God_KingLv2

I am enjoying it! Recommended. F the word limit thing. NOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBADNOTBAD

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