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Daoist890597
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2024-09-08 15:45

So the MC has managed to unlock a broken skill like 'Absolute Hypnosis' that will ruin the story for good? The gamer system itself is already bad enough, and the story won't be interesting for long before it loses its charm.

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That1OtakuDude
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I'm not gonna make him just turn everyone into a slave if that's what you're worried about cause I know just how op this can be, instead I'm only gonna use it to get rid of inconveniences or facilitate some plot points later on especially when it goes to other worlds and as for the whole gamer system... it's not really a gamer system mc doesn't gain strength from leveling up he essentially got the powers of noir and his powers work under the premise of everyone else from thay word.. and so far from what I remember in 'hidden dungeon' levels are mostly just the representation of someone's strength and not the true extent of their strength, hence why mcs level is still at 20 so he's not gonna go kill rogue fallens reach level 69 and one shot ophis I'm actually considering leaving his level at 20 since he isn't in Noir's world and therefore the world will that controls the whole level thingy doesn't exist in dxd so it's mostly just a little niche leftover from absorbing noirs template and also one more thing the skillset of Noir itself is incredibly op especially in a world like DxD so if you were expecting from Chinese Cultivation story where mc jaa to beat down every single man he comes across to level up 1 time then you're in the wrong genre man even in the cannon Noir became incredible strong super fast and that was cause he had a harem

Archmage145
Archmage145Lv4

Don't let people tell you how to write your story, just cook, and they'll shut their mouths.👍

That1OtakuDude:I'm not gonna make him just turn everyone into a slave if that's what you're worried about cause I know just how op this can be, instead I'm only gonna use it to get rid of inconveniences or facilitate some plot points later on especially when it goes to other worlds and as for the whole gamer system... it's not really a gamer system mc doesn't gain strength from leveling up he essentially got the powers of noir and his powers work under the premise of everyone else from thay word.. and so far from what I remember in 'hidden dungeon' levels are mostly just the representation of someone's strength and not the true extent of their strength, hence why mcs level is still at 20 so he's not gonna go kill rogue fallens reach level 69 and one shot ophis I'm actually considering leaving his level at 20 since he isn't in Noir's world and therefore the world will that controls the whole level thingy doesn't exist in dxd so it's mostly just a little niche leftover from absorbing noirs template and also one more thing the skillset of Noir itself is incredibly op especially in a world like DxD so if you were expecting from Chinese Cultivation story where mc jaa to beat down every single man he comes across to level up 1 time then you're in the wrong genre man even in the cannon Noir became incredible strong super fast and that was cause he had a harem
cocobum
cocobumLv13

It feels cheap, like if you have unlimited power at your fingertips, it takes out the tension and makes it look trivial and if something bad happens to the MC it makes him look stupid because he didn't use his op-ass power.

That1OtakuDude:I'm not gonna make him just turn everyone into a slave if that's what you're worried about cause I know just how op this can be, instead I'm only gonna use it to get rid of inconveniences or facilitate some plot points later on especially when it goes to other worlds and as for the whole gamer system... it's not really a gamer system mc doesn't gain strength from leveling up he essentially got the powers of noir and his powers work under the premise of everyone else from thay word.. and so far from what I remember in 'hidden dungeon' levels are mostly just the representation of someone's strength and not the true extent of their strength, hence why mcs level is still at 20 so he's not gonna go kill rogue fallens reach level 69 and one shot ophis I'm actually considering leaving his level at 20 since he isn't in Noir's world and therefore the world will that controls the whole level thingy doesn't exist in dxd so it's mostly just a little niche leftover from absorbing noirs template and also one more thing the skillset of Noir itself is incredibly op especially in a world like DxD so if you were expecting from Chinese Cultivation story where mc jaa to beat down every single man he comes across to level up 1 time then you're in the wrong genre man even in the cannon Noir became incredible strong super fast and that was cause he had a harem
That1OtakuDude
That1OtakuDudeAuthor

the novel was never about mc gaining infinite powe, yeah it's part of the plot but it's not the focus of the story if you want to read something like that go read a Cultivation story lol the point of this story is more about the girls rather than actual dxd plot, ofc I don't want to make it a straight up doujin so mc isn't just gonna mindrape them into submission but hes definitely not gonna let himself make a dumb move like let an enemy live or something like that, I do appreciate the feedback tho just that this story is more about smut that actual plot lol

cocobum:It feels cheap, like if you have unlimited power at your fingertips, it takes out the tension and makes it look trivial and if something bad happens to the MC it makes him look stupid because he didn't use his op-ass power.
Tinman
TinmanLv1

Hold on a minute! This story is just a smut than actual plot?!

That1OtakuDude:the novel was never about mc gaining infinite powe, yeah it's part of the plot but it's not the focus of the story if you want to read something like that go read a Cultivation story lol the point of this story is more about the girls rather than actual dxd plot, ofc I don't want to make it a straight up doujin so mc isn't just gonna mindrape them into submission but hes definitely not gonna let himself make a dumb move like let an enemy live or something like that, I do appreciate the feedback tho just that this story is more about smut that actual plot lol
That1OtakuDude
That1OtakuDudeAuthor

yes but no I will put actual fights and stuff but I really don't have the time or creativity to make this a 100+ chapter series.... at least I don't think so, so instead I want to make it idk 40-80 chapters? depends on how this all develops lol

Tinman:Hold on a minute! This story is just a smut than actual plot?!
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