Review Detail of Hellycomic in Dragon Ball UltimateVERSE

Item: Dragon Ball UltimateVERSE
Rating: 5

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Hellycomic作者26dHellycomic

Guys write some reviews , about the work and Please support , and sorry that I had to delete my earlier work , because of a notice from editor-in-chief, I had 22 power stone in that , I feel very sad and also happy that my fans loved that work . Hope you guys love this too and don't forget to read my another novel "Ultinum Crest " . I will put a lot of work in that .

Dragon Ball UltimateVERSE

Hellycomic

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Gratiz_Lv2Gratiz_

The story is stupid and super random. But that's fine, I would still read it if it weren't for the bad translation (if it's not a translation, then that's even worse)

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Hellycomic作者Hellycomic

Please tell me, what part I need to improve , I will try my best to improve my work . I am now trying to make a work which 70% viewers will like it , hope I can make it sucecessful.[img=recommend]

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funmaxwellLv13funmaxwell

I read the intro and I thought absolutely not wasting my time on this. because the intro read like a bunch of broken ideas strong together and a sort of MTL translation. and what I did get out of that was main character super overpowered and has impregnated all female characters in the story.

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Hellycomic作者Hellycomic

I am trying my best to improve the quality of the story more and more , I started as a newbie and absorbing some knowledge of pros , writing my own fan fiction

funmaxwell:I read the intro and I thought absolutely not wasting my time on this. because the intro read like a bunch of broken ideas strong together and a sort of MTL translation. and what I did get out of that was main character super overpowered and has impregnated all female characters in the story.
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Rinchan7Lv3Rinchan7

I had a stroke reading the synopsis

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