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Bierbart
BierbartLv142mth
2024-09-07 22:52

at chapter 21 and all i can say its a waste of time.... at chapter 21 and all i can say its a waste of time.... at chapter 21 and all i can say its a waste of time....

Naruto: Hinata And Hanabi Both are married to me - Life Simulator

Exotica_Pvt
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50 Chs

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Exotica_Pvt
Exotica_Pvt作者

In which direction you wanted the story to go?

2mth
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Godfather_Gambler
Godfather_GamblerLv12

I don't know about you, but it's going pretty well.

2mth
Beyond_
Beyond_Lv3

Why does your writing style seem so weird? Do I feel embarrassed reading a few lines of text? I'm not trying to be offensive, but that's exactly what I felt reading it, shame. But I don't know why, could you please explain it to me?

Exotica_Pvt:In which direction you wanted the story to go?
2mth
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OneeyedDaoist
OneeyedDaoistLv4

it feels ai to me

Beyond_: Why does your writing style seem so weird? Do I feel embarrassed reading a few lines of text? I'm not trying to be offensive, but that's exactly what I felt reading it, shame. But I don't know why, could you please explain it to me?
1mth
2
Lc_The_Second
Lc_The_SecondLv4

Ai generated or Ai revised and formated ?

OneeyedDaoist:it feels ai to me
1mth
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Why? Elaborate more

16d
Other Reviews
Daoist89yPri
Daoist89yPriLv10

Tem um bom potencial adorei até agora e uma boa história por enquanto kkk It has good potential, I've loved it so far and a good story so far lol

2mth

Jesse_8954
Jesse_8954Lv3

it has good potential i look forward to seeing more chapters

2mth
MD_Toriqul_Islam
MD_Toriqul_IslamLv4

Story has great potential. just make it a little more fast-paced.

2mth
DavidRK
DavidRKLv3

Good potential, going to let it marinate for awhile. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

2mth
ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4

okay romance feel forced they're ninjas and no experince even shoi?? Then something that got me annoyed was him getting pushed yelled at and pushed for kissing hannabi stood there saying ouch, acting like that wasn't or didn't seem like an rejection you had to fix that author cmon i feel its an 1 star, But its an high 2 only because writting decents and update stabillity.

1mth
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