Review Detail of Bob_Uchiha_XD in One Piece: I'm Celestial Dragon
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The main protagonist was born as a celestial dragon, like the ruling class of the world. What does he do with that powerful status? Are you having fun? He despises them because the Celestial Dragons are the worst evil in the world, preferring to humiliate himself rather than receive help from disgusting pirates... Maybe the protagonist is gay and will reveal it near the end of the fanfic? The main protagonist not only has mental problems because he despises his social class that ironically grants him privileges; He also has a stupid and suicidal hero complex, that is, the protagonist is stupid and commits suicidal acts to feel like a good boy. I understand that you want to overthrow the world government... I understand that you want to become strong, but there are good ways, for example by using the privileges of being a Celestial Dragon.
One Piece: I'm Celestial Dragon
Musouka
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Don't forget that the protagonist was reincarnated with knowledge of the state of the story's world. He despises how they [the Celestial Dragons] sit around waiting for their downfall and amuse themselves with trivial matters. Will the World Government really protect them until the end? As for his situation with the pirates, he hasn't interacted with them in the story yet So why do you say that the chapter in which there was talk about pirates was when some Celestial Dragons spread rumors about his dealings with pirates? Naturally, he shows the opposite of that, as the Celestial Dragons despise them And no, he is not gay we are building a story and events here. If you want to see +18 chapters to suggest otherwise, then say so. He also does not despise his social class; he has remained cautious until now due to the mysterious circumstances of his parents' death and his ambiguous situation, which will be revealed later on.
For example, in this Chinese fanfic novel, the main protagonist is a celestial dragon and does not hesitate to use his privileges. So please, consider (but don't feel obligated) to have this protagonist as a reference and combine it with your talent, so you will have a story with more readers, just like Akinkan40. Search pic in Google:
Musouka:Don't forget that the protagonist was reincarnated with knowledge of the state of the story's world. He despises how they [the Celestial Dragons] sit around waiting for their downfall and amuse themselves with trivial matters. Will the World Government really protect them until the end? As for his situation with the pirates, he hasn't interacted with them in the story yet So why do you say that the chapter in which there was talk about pirates was when some Celestial Dragons spread rumors about his dealings with pirates? Naturally, he shows the opposite of that, as the Celestial Dragons despise them And no, he is not gay we are building a story and events here. If you want to see +18 chapters to suggest otherwise, then say so. He also does not despise his social class; he has remained cautious until now due to the mysterious circumstances of his parents' death and his ambiguous situation, which will be revealed later on.
If you want to write about a dumb and annoying protagonist hero... Wouldn't it be better to choose Luffy or one of his lackeys? 🤔
Musouka:Don't forget that the protagonist was reincarnated with knowledge of the state of the story's world. He despises how they [the Celestial Dragons] sit around waiting for their downfall and amuse themselves with trivial matters. Will the World Government really protect them until the end? As for his situation with the pirates, he hasn't interacted with them in the story yet So why do you say that the chapter in which there was talk about pirates was when some Celestial Dragons spread rumors about his dealings with pirates? Naturally, he shows the opposite of that, as the Celestial Dragons despise them And no, he is not gay we are building a story and events here. If you want to see +18 chapters to suggest otherwise, then say so. He also does not despise his social class; he has remained cautious until now due to the mysterious circumstances of his parents' death and his ambiguous situation, which will be revealed later on.