Item: The Rise of a Star
Rating: 4.4

Sora_XILv12mth

2024-08-29 05:54

not a fan of books but sounds like a good plot so far, would love to see this animated, not gonna lie the start caught me off guard with him suddenly being broken, would love some more context as to how he got there (i only read 1 chapter) but otherwise it's very good, would recommend, hopefully it turns into an anime in the future

The Rise of a Star

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avronAuthor

Hi Author here. I'm rating my book this because even with a bit off bumpy start. As of chapter 9 I have a firm grasp of the writing, and it will only improve with time. I think this book is great even though it it's just a magic world novel the route this book will take will not be like your average power fantasy most invincible mc. I hope you enjoy.

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UBI_MasterLv4

Such an interesting story and interesting power concepts. i really do hoping that in the future, the power system can be explained more. This is a fitting book for you who want to enjoy the light read.

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Asurababaei10Lv1

This story is very wonderful. I am waiting for new chapters of this story. This story has a good cover and story theme and can draw the reader into the world of the story. Good characterization is another feature of this story.

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SHADOW_IS_LIFELv2

Remember me you ask me to give a review now The author praises the fluency of their English writing style, which is professional and popular. They suggest adding dialogue tags to make dialogues easier for readers. The author gives three stars for the story development, despite the initial lack of prepared chapters. They commend the character building and the fascinating world background. The author suggests that the narrator may find the dialogue confusing. Overall, the book is good, with a unique twist and interpretation. However, the author needs to maintain these advantages while addressing the disadvantages. Consistency in writing styles and a clear plot are recommended. Overall, the author's work is commendable.

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SaithKalenLv14

First of all, I like your writing style. Your English is very fluent, which I find professional and at the same time popular with the masses. It has the same vibe as those books that are published as physical copies. The only problem is that, when writing the dialogue parts, it became confusing, especially on the latter chapters. It is an important part in writing narrative stories to put a dialogue tag to make it easier for the reader to know who was speaking. Although I advice not to put it on every dialogue. I can't give a perfect score for updating stability because this was just a newly published book that is free to read so we, the readers, don't have the right to obligate the author to update regularly. I, myself, am an author so I can relate to you in this regard. I gave three stars for the story development for the same reason. This was just the beginning and you only have a few prepared chapters, but despite that, there were already some developments in the timeline, although they weren't that big. A key development was already provided, which is why it's got a three-star rating. What I commend the most in your story is how you build your character. It was just the beginning but there are many important details about the character and how he might have grown as the story developed further. Lastly, the way you built the world background was fascinating, in my opinion. You didn't give everything in one go but it didn't lack details either. Just enough information about the world was provided that gives the basic details and also provides bait for the readers to read more to know the world more. Maybe the little problem is how you narrated it so others might find it confusing. Overall, this book is good. It has a nice touch, although not unique in terms of genre or the chosen trope but it's own way of interpretation, so its better. And it'll be greater if the author is able to maintain the mentioned advantages and apply the disadvantages I have provided. Just be consistent in your chosen writing styles and follow through on your story plot. Good job!

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FrostyBotLv15

I'm writing this review after finishing chapter 4. The overall story is really interesting. However, at some points, I noticed small grammatical errors as well as some confusing dialog between characters. as of right now, I don't know much about the world itself other than mana and martial arts exist as well as a few laws. As for character design all I know about one character is he is tall and white I would have loved some more details about the characters and environments. Even after all this critiquing, I'm still looking forward to seeing what happens next. I'll make sure to review this novel again when more chapters are added.

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ShenrenLonelyCloudLv1

Total shit novel, author etc. Author is shamelessly publishing his book on other novel's comment section which is making a confusion between that author and his fans. Get a life man. I don't know how you got those reviews but I can assure 100% that they 1000% fake reviews with some slight substraction.

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Dijon_JacksonLv1

Amazing book written by an amazing writer. He clearly knows and understands how to entice and captivate the reader. He has a good sense of imagery and characterization. Great plot and writing. He is definitely going places and I’m here for it!

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