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DEMON_SLAYER_4182Lv12mth
2024-08-20 07:55

The writing quality is really good but there are some little details that doesn't make sense like when the fight ended against the bowl hunter "she just stood up and go". Overall nice idea and was fun to read I wonder how you are going to do a romance with Gilgamesh arrogance good luck.

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yeah ngl this is my first time writing something and it is hard asf. I feel it would've been easier if it was just another dxd with system. I hope you enjoy it though

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