Writing style: 8/10 It is good but could use some work. The author does use some filler words here and there. These filler words can be avoided. Although it does get better as you progress. Story 7.5/10 Generic tower progression fantasy story with a system attached. Although the story is okay, it isn't a breath of fresh air story wise Narration 7/10 Sometimes the narration requires some clarity. Dialogs 7/10 Sometimes the dialogs are monotonous to read. It doesn't give much distinction between characters. Formatting 6/10 System formatting needs some work; it doesn't look neat. Character 8/10 Overall great character of MC, but there are problems here and there with his monotone nature of behaving with others. I think the author can show more of his emotions by showing not telling (Like he is amazed or what not) Overall, a decent read. I would recommend you all to try
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